I believe leaving the story in this state is for the best instead of continuing where you'll lose interest somewhere in the middle. Call me a pessimist its fine but I have seen good stories start but never finish.

That aside THIS is the story that I've been looking for for so long! I'm so glad I stumbled upon this rough diamond! I can finally imagine Louise retelling how she ended up in the Capital Wasteland.

Hey, I doubt you are still writing this, but I think it's pretty cool so far. I really hope you continue win it someday.

Not sure if I really should bother with commenting, but hey, it was really enjoyable to read and I liked the idea. It was also written in a way you could kind of call it a one-shot, leaving the in between story for the reader to imagine. Though, I was hoping the last scenes would be about Louise waking in the infirmary and beginning her tale or something like that. Sort of, the beginning is the end kind of story. You see the prologue and epilogue at once. I'll just imagine myself up the rest of the epilogue part, as I'll imagine up what might have happened in their adventures.

Something I will say though, I think i skipped/skimmed the first thousand words or so on that dragon bit. I'm not sure what details I missed, but I've a feeling that it wasn't really important to the meat of the story. If it wasn't for the Fav count I might not have bothered to push forward. Sure glad I did though. (Pretty sure I tried reading this before, but that beginning discouraged me.)

Thank you for writing this, and if you ever see this review I want you to know you can write a decent tale. There were tense issues here and there, like I couldn't figured out if you wanted to be in present tense or past, but I sort of trucked through and kept on reading. Once your really started, it kept my interest to the end. Great job and thank you for such an imaginative experience.

But you also suck, like every other author on this website, me included, that there ain't and probably won't be any more to this story as well.

Oh well!
Quaver Ava

So far I am loving the story! Please keep it up, it is a very interesting concept!

Wow... this sucks. You just threw her into the main story without a care in the world how you did it? Stupid.

So... it would have been a story told entirely in flashbacks?

...man this story deserved t die...

Intriguing.

You have got to finish this story. I really like the premises of Louise being sent and returned from a dangerous world and having people react to how she has changed. Please update?

Nice start. But will you continue this story.

So, will you be continuing this? Because this is a fantastic start and I look forward to more.

So will this be updated anytime soon?

I love this. I think one second in Tristan equals either a month or up to a year in the wasteland. Science FTW!

This is interesting. A complete time jump from the time the summoning ritual was preformed to when Louise and her companion made it back to Tristan, all in one second! Are we to assume that the mysterious Alex is the Familiar of Louise, or her lover?

Update pretty please?
It will be appreciated :3

Let me just say, this first chapter is awesome and has grabbed my attention more firmly than any other fammiliar of zero crossover I've read to date. I now really want to see how a wasteland hardened Louise will fit into her own world and how she has developed as a person without the influence of her family or aristocrasy.
I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation, well done.