Sounds good so far! Hehe can't wait for more :D

Hush, little baby don't say a word.
Largo's gonna make sure that you get fed.
And if he doesn't, well you know what?
Ashe is going to get a heart and help you out.
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I like the fic, please never stop writing! :)

This made me smile, especially since everyone on this site seems to ignore the possibilities with Largo and his past...other than that, you portrayed everyone accurately and hilariously. *thumbs up*