This was hilarious

Awesome story very realistic

I loved this so much I'm coming back for a second time. I really enjoyed this.

I loved this so much

Wow that was a fun read!
I love stories with an outsider’s point of view.
Thanks for sharing!

Seriously regretting grabbing my water from the fridge literally right before reaching the Ed is Roy's son bit because now I can say yes I have choked on water

That... Was amazing.

There is SO MUCH to like in this fic, it's a beautiful short story! Nice and bitesize, gives you just what you need. The parts I'm still rolling around in my head are Ed looking like a bored wolf (excellent description?) and just... The entire paragraph that ends something like "His behavior said mid-teens, but his eyes said old, old, old."

I love this.

I very much enjoyed this, thank you!

I love this so, so much.

This was amazing. I wish there was more stories like this one.

Interesting to see Edward from outside perspectives...

I love the view of an outsider looking in. The characters were all spot on. James' assumptions and confusions made perfect sense. I loved this this!

hah! This was fantastic! I really love how well you are able to take a look at Edward through the eyes of other's. It brings on a distinct awe with Ed that you don't normally get when reading through his eyes. :) Very well done!

I'm dying with laughter. This is awesome!
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Man I loved this! The characterization was fantastic.