What a delightful story! I really enjoyed it! I did love that you let us see Valnor!

I absolutely love this chapter and your story so far I am so hooked it's ridiculous what a fantastic way to introduce the character and backstory it makes sense it flows perfectly your writing Style is positively wonderful I can't wait to read the rest of the story

Thank you so much for sharing your stories. I've enjoyed following Adelyn's story.
Now unto the next one.

I'm so hurt and disgusted that Legolas was raped. That rape is even present in this story that I was growing to really enjoy. To tell you the truth this is an amazing story but I wish you would have posted a note about scenes of that nature being present. It's a horrible thing to read about...which is in a way like witnessing it, and an even more horrible thing to live through. I'm sorry if it seems like I'm bashing. I'm not, and I and others appreciate the fact that you even took the time to share your talent. It's just that some of us are very sensitive to those subjects. That's all I wanted to bring attention to.

what an incredible dance between a white, pure, mithril dragon and the balrog.
and poor glofindel.

but elladan.
damn! he can't give it up for anything.!

I loved reading your story and follow Adelyn's life in Middle-Earth! Thank you! It was an addictive story :D

Good luck with your publishable work!

The prank on the newlyweds was funny :))) And that little squirrel...:)))

Poor Ro, bet he'll stop pranking for some time. But I'm sure he'll forget and do some pranks in the future. The same for Dan

To think Legolas from the LOTR,according to your story, went through something like this...a very brave elf!

I can't believe Glorfindel spanked Elladan like that when Legolas was just raped...he could have brought back bad memories! Well, bet Glorfindel was just too...enraged to think clearly.

Eru made her a healer! Loved that.

And Thranduil kissed her :D

Legolas' spirit is so strong now, I know he'll make it!

And Elladan...incorrigible as always! He really should learn from his mistakes!

Glad they managed to free the spirits and reach Legolas and Elladan. Adelyn needs to use her ice!

I feel so sorry for those raped like that, even if they were so evil! That was so sick!

The drowning plan was good since the water killed so many, but they should have thought the water could have drowned Legolas too, before they could have reached him.

I can't believe Legolas got raped again. Poor guy, hope he'll be able to live after all this and have a normal sexual life...his wife will have to be very patient with him...and show him that he deserves respect and love...:(

I can't believe she killed the orc like that! That was a shock...bet she'll have nightmares after things will settle down. Especially since I think that orc won't be the last one.

Elladan really got what he deserved with that herb...not with getting caught by the orcs, that was another failed plan...he should really stop and think more!

They are husband and wife! :)))

I feel sorry for Glorfindel though, the twins should stop before they'll really hurt somebody...I wonder what Glorfindel will do once he'll find out why he was throwing up?! :D

A forgotten city? Must be Menegroth...

Poor Adelyn! At least now she's riding with Glorfindel.

Maybe Aragorn's news are really what Thranduil needs to stay sane and powerful for his son.

She helped Legolas in spirit and now she's about to help him for real.

As for Glorfindel...he's so cute :D Love his character!