wood release ninjas... not being present for naruto's birth- when they could have helped out if the worst happened. They would surely have planned for the worst- and had them both in the village in the hopes of using them to subdue the biju.

hope you have him use his magic soon...

i always felt that danzo blew it up to trash sakumo's reputation to decrease the chances of him becoming a hokage candidate. if sakumo had lived, he could have done much much more good for the village as he was supposedly as strong as the 3 students of the third.

This is very well written. The character development and plot development is on point. I love the introduction of new characters and while I was hesitant on Tora having the Otter contact, it actually works really well. I can't wait to see what you do with this, and I hope it is still being continued?

"Shark Bait, hooh haha"

Awh, I wish there had been an Fuuton/Water contract that he could have gotten it would have been neat for him to have a flying one that also uses water. Seeing as he loves to be in the air

in the warnings if OCC means out of character shouldn't it be OOC (Out Of Character)

So... how exactly did Harry learn the new world's language?

I just came up with an idea for a one shot set sometime in this book, idk. Somehow kojimaru gets into the A:TLA world and meets iroh. They bond over tea and stuff, but I literally have to see kojimaru meet iroh, maybe set when kojimaru becomes old? Idk just a prompt.

SPOILERS

You said waist instead of waste, this is just before the tea ceremony when kojimaru is getting Shikoku to hurry up.

It’s chapter 11?

I agree. My only problem is that at that age (3-12) they wouldn’t have a history lecture for an hour! In my country, that wouldn’t happen in primary school (5-11) or even secondary school (12-17). Maybe a small talk for 5-10 minutes, but nothing classified as a lecture! Those are more reserved for university. To me a lecture is when the instructor is lecturing for an hour and is not interacting a lot, whilst the students take notes. Sometimes there will b at the end. Lectures aren’t made for children, they’re for adults. I kind of went on a rant about one word choice, but I couldn’t stop thinking about that throughout the chapter. For kids, you want it to be less talking to them, more interactive to help them understand. Maybe they can make a poster, or do something more creative, y’know. Other than that I’m loving it!

I’m rereading this fanfic, and it’s sooooo good. I’m starting to remember inklings of it now!

He's weak for not being able to kill. Hopefully he stays super short and cute because they balance each other otherwise there's not point

I love this story so much! Hope you come back to it and finish it best regards Evo-Kun

And I ALREADY dislike what you are doing with Harry. A defensive/slippery type, as opposed to the powerhouse tenzo supposedly becomes. Aside from the fact that he is growing in response to the personal style of SOMEONE ELSE, Have you forgoten the fact that Tenzo was no close-combat type in canon? He was always the ninjutsu kind of fighter. Not to mention the fact that Mokuton usage tired him quickly.

Shame. Kinda wanted to see thus play out.