If naruto was adopted by mikoto

Sasuke: im the best brother

Naruto: no i am itachis favorite

Itachi: actually sasuke is

Narutostabbed by invisible depressed arrow and sulks in corner*

Shisui: naruto is my favorite

This whole story is literally total chaos. It is pretty confusing. how the fuck did so many people of the Bleach Universe get to the Naruto Universe. I understand Gin because he was summoned by Minato but seriously everyone else is completely unmentioned. I am literally so confused right now

Every time you write "adopted father" it sounds like Naruto adopted Gin. XD

Like it but to heavy on his accent

Is it weird I like Kosuke?

Please continue it soon it was good great job

This started good but now with 2 new characters introduced every chapter I can’t follow what’s going on and you’ve forgotten to write about the main chars except a few sentences here and there.

Well this pretty dark turn for something tagged adventure and humor.

I have a couple of issues 1 gin is very different in this story half of his dialogue I just can't imagine him saying and his personality in the story I very very strange it just doesn't suit gin and his character no offense to story I just think it would have been better if you used someone like ikkaku or Reno or someone that has good comedic moments and using gin this way kinda takes away the good points about his character and what makes him a great character in the first such as his seriousness or his story beyond just the betrayal of aizen.

Bigger than Aizen's ego? Good one...ha

first of all...the story has very good potential...here are a few things I noticed(my opinions) so far

...the hokage was easily summoned when gin told the gate guards..it shouldn't be like that..after all he's a literal leader of a village...

second...the way they speak lessens the greatness of the story..I know you were trying to make it sound funny or interesting but there are many better ways than to make them sound like nigga's on the hood(no offense)

Interesting idea and plot and amazing chapter

Oh god, you brought Yoruichi into Konoha, that is hilarious.

Ooh boy! It's like the whole entire place of Konoha has been affected by Kanzen Saimin. Or perhaps something similar. Hmm!

Keep this up!

... fuck it, I'm done. This went from zero to "hell in a handbasket" far too quickly for my tastes, I'm out.