Reviews for Breaking the Illusion of Tranquility |
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mallory.b.rosenstein chapter 23 . 4/20 I am hooked can’t wait for the next chapter. |
Mr.Almond Brown chapter 12 . 2/9 Seth is supposed to be our adorable, youngest, bestest and brightest wolf here and WHY THE FUCK IS HE ACTING SO HOT AND ALREADY INTO THIS STUFF?! |
supboyyyyy93 chapter 18 . 1/10 Embry in love with Hinata? lol get that imprint crap out of here. |
supboyyyyy93 chapter 17 . 1/10 That imprint shit is such bad and lazy romance it ain't even funny. I always hated that soulmate crap with a passion. It's basically brainwashing. |
crazyKate92 chapter 23 . 1/6 Please update again! I’d love to know what happens next! |
Guest chapter 23 . 1/4 Plieassss update huhuhu ToT |
Bri chapter 23 . 12/24/2018 Please tell me this isn’t it. You can’t end it with a cliffhanger and not update in over a year! The story has a solid plot and no noticeable errors. I have so many questions! Are Hinata and Seth gonna break up? Will she and Bella become friends? How will Seth react to the knowledge of an imprint? Are there other Naruto characters? Will Hinata be a werewolf? Will her first life be exposed? I mean, her body is becoming one with her Kunoichi body. Will she participate in the upcoming battles? See, so many loose ends need to be tied! The story can’t end there. |
HashtagJustMonika chapter 23 . 9/27/2018 Well this was a really good story I fully enjoyed it:) |
Guest chapter 23 . 6/23/2018 I wish you'd come back and continue this. It's such a great story. |
AkatsukiLover465 chapter 1 . 3/31/2018 Hey this hasn’t been updated in a year and a half and I know updating is hard, especially when you’re writing a story as insanely good as yours but like If it’s abandoned can you put that it’s abandoned Because I think about this fic literally every day and I’m always like “god I can’t wait for that to update so Hinata can finally kick some ass or maybe some new naruto characters can get introduced (personally I’m hoping for Hanabi or Kiba)” but I would really prefer it if you at least posted a chapter saying that you’re discontinuing the story. Or maybe you’ve just started to be a normal person and you don’t have time for fanfiction and you won’t even get this review, which is fine. But if you’re still a nerd then please update I’m dyinggg. Thanks. |
MayanPanther chapter 23 . 1/21/2018 Oh wow! So much is happening! Love your work and can't wait to read more! |
RyssaReads chapter 23 . 1/13/2018 So I read this again and OMG you can not give up on this THIS IS BRILLIANT! Holysmoly I am supporting you and this story a 1000% I really want them to see Hinata fight. I also want to see her put them in the place too because she's grown, badass and is frustrated at the world. ugh this story is beautiful. Hope you read this and get inspired because your doing great. Your writing is so smooth and fluid and you write these characters so well. Like I feel like they are real complex people going thru the motions. So thank you |
redeclipse516 chapter 23 . 11/11/2017 Totally awesome. I’m really excited to see what’s next! |
behind-the-heart chapter 23 . 8/21/2017 love this please please please updaye |
RyssaReads chapter 23 . 8/12/2017 Yoooooo this is like the most amazing crossover ever totally brilliant |