Reviews for Next Time
SSABlackbird10 chapter 33 . 10/20/2019
I know it’s been like 5 years but I really wish you’d continue this! It’s really good!
Blum56 chapter 33 . 2/15/2019
Y se acabó..
helly1bradleywyatt chapter 1 . 12/20/2017
Please please finish I want to know what happens next!
Emma chapter 33 . 12/1/2017
Please continue! I want to know what happens next
Evil Regal Maxxeen chapter 33 . 4/29/2017
I really wish this would be updated soon!
milagglad chapter 33 . 5/24/2016
Que suspenso...actualiza por favor
Guest chapter 33 . 3/29/2016
OMG I just read this entire story tonight. I didn't realize it is not complete. I'm sad to see it hasn't been updated in over a year. Just wanted to let you know you're a great writer.
thecardiogod chapter 33 . 3/18/2016
I just read all the chapters in one go. This is really good and I'm totally obsessed. Continue this, please, I can't handle the cliffhangers.
MochaGirl14 chapter 33 . 1/13/2016
Hello, I just discovered your wonderful tale and read it all in one go. I love it! Poor JJ. Please tell me that you will update and complete this work. That cliffhanger left me slack jawed and anxious for JJ.
Erik chapter 33 . 12/30/2015
You don't know me, but I can offer you an idea for a chapter you will possibly or assuming make a sex scene with Emily and JJ. When you have both JJ and Emily come home to Emily's apartment, have JJ say to Emily, 'Em...after everything we've been through the past few weeks; with...Will and us...I want you to know that..." Have Emily ask as she reaches for JJ hands, "What is it Jayje?" JJ said, "That... I'm ready." Have Emily ask a little puzzled but quickly decipher what JJ was talking about, "Ready? Your ready?" Have JJ interlace their fingers together, "For us. For this step in our relationship." Have them kiss gently, tenderly and have Emily softly push JJ against a wall and pick her by lifting her up underneath her thighs/legs and JJ wrapping her legs around Emily's waist and carry JJ into the bedroom. Have Emily ask as she tenderly strokes JJ's cheek after placing her on the bed, "Are you sure you want this?" Have JJ respond by tenderly kissing Emily, giving her consent. Even have JJ plead half way, "Em, please." Have Emily ask lovingly, "Please what baby?" Have JJ answer, " I need you...inside..." Then have JJ take her turn and end the chapter by having JJ lying on top of Emily in bed, them trading sleepy kisses and Emily whisper as JJ falls asleep first and placing a tender kiss on her forehead, "Sleep well baby. I love you."
T-Rex Ninja Kid chapter 33 . 11/1/2015
Dangnabbit! I was hoping for more. Please don't forget about this story. :)
HopeLoveLife chapter 33 . 9/14/2015
Please update, this is really good
I am Clara Oswald chapter 33 . 8/29/2015
AHHH THIS IS AMAZING, YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE!
jjcrimminds chapter 33 . 5/17/2015
Oh my God you need to finish this! This story is amazing. And that cliffhanger. This is going to drive me crazy!
jrzygurl89 chapter 33 . 5/5/2015
I hope JJ is alright
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