awesome! mini-roth, hahahaha!
i liked how you included all problems because of his height, the squeaky voice, the wind while cloud walking, 'earthquake' as he fell etc.
had fun imagining sephiroth in a handkerchief, and the part where he was sitting on cloud on the bed showering him in affection was adorable.
loveley bit of fanfiction!

This is both amusing and adorable.

GOD, THIS WAS CUTE. Little, chipmunk-sized and Alvin-sounding Sephiroth. XD God, that was great! And Zack came up with the best nicknames for him. TinkerSeph was great. Also...it's really freaking adorable that Cloud can still call Seph 'sir' even when they're sharing an intimate moment. :3 Ah, my heart!

*coos*

Mini-Seph is adorable and not at all intimidating, though I'd still be careful- if he's stuck like that long enough he'll just find alternate ways to retaliate. XD

Good.

ah hope they picked up Seph's clothes

Little!Seph is one of my favorites. I loved getting to see Cloud fight and be the strong one too. Your description is as descriptively descriptive as ever. Keep it up, dude.

Aww that was very cute

*cries* y r u so guuuuuuuuuud

A little two-shot that packs a punch in the feels. I adore the way you make Cloud so heroic and strong yet beautifully sensitive at the same time.

Your team work with Tomo is amazing

Aw pure sweetness! I love it! Mini-Seph is awesome! Lol!

Awwwwwwwwwn AWESOME story!

Awww, Miniroth is sooo cute :3

I want to read the next part, now !