You make Konoha too much militaristic, and the Hokage too paranoid. Come on dude, there is no way he would spare a special jonin to look after not even a genin. It's sad really, very few fanfiction writers can actually understand the spirit of Naruto. Konoha was all about protecting the kids, you are bending the meaning of the maga to opposite direction.

What is freedom if you have to run away?

BRUHHHH THIS IS SO FUCKIN AMAZING! legit binged this in one day and holy crap was that an epic cliffhanger! I’m head over heels in love with the way you weave the characters personalities into both dialogue and the perspective shifts and I can’t wait too se how you handle the future arc! Keep up the mind blowing work!

What a fucking waste of words

Yo could we maybe get a source on the fact that the author has passed?

Ive never left a review before but your story has been so fantastic to follow along to that i just had to say as much! You have a wonderful way of bringing depth into characters that is very pleasing to read. The motivation and thoughts of them are so unique as well but you still manage to keep it believable and make them seem otherwise normal and its very engaging. I truly hope you finish this story, youve gotten me, and many others im sure, far too wrapped up in it!

Man this is just getting sadder and sadder. MC is technically 20 or 30 something years old and yet it's like you're intentionally making the universe against her. I mean at some point the amount of negativity towards the leadership and complaining about it just gets too heavy. At this rate it just seems MC is doomed to remain cannon fodder (rat contrat? seriously? why didn't you go for a freaking worm contract or something?)

The author has passed? seriously?

Omg what a way to end the chapter! I’m excited to see how the team dynamic will play out! I hope that Rei genuinely likes Lee esp after their spar and they challenge each other. I also love how Gai looked for Kakashi to ask him about Rei! 10/10 good content. I hope Gai can help pull some of the humanity out of Rei

Well. so much for becoming an S-Rank ninja lmao

Defcon, not Defcom.

Guys if you didn't know already, the author has sadly passed due to health reasons. There is no point in asking for another update. Lets just honor this story and move on.

Why did you stop writing this story?

Is this story dead? I hope not, though I find it strange how so many SI stories age the protagonist becoming a missing-nin. This story also got me thinking. Tsunade was a missing-nin in all but official documents, her situation really shows how much favouritism the sandaime has for his own students and those close to him. She abandoned Konoha and refused both missions and to help it until she was dragged back, she may not have been registered a missing-nin but she was a missing-nin in all but name either way, she even helped other villages at times as seen with the Raikage getting her help to heal his subordinates. It’s kinda sad how to see how hypocritical the leaf village is.

Though I kinda wish Rei showed more concern for her clan, I get she’s selfish but she had to realise how much her clan went out of their way to help her when she was taken to T and I. It’s my hope she stays with the village or rather she stays with her clan, she could acquire her own rank in the standard force then quit and simply say she is focusing on being the next clan head, after which she could just sel her own services out to whoever she wants with out needing the Hokage’s approval as she is a clan head and also not a member of the shinobi forces, basically a ronin, or a clan shinobi instead of a village shinobi. If she’s S-Class the Hokage can’t do anything either, as S-Class shinobi can cause a lot of damage and all around mass destruction. Not to mention the hokage is too old to come out of a confrontation with an S-Rank alive and it’s not like other Konoha shinobi would be able to interfere, cause Rei would have 4 of the most prominent shinobi clans on her side, Yamanaka, Nara, Akamichi and Hyuuga, all in all, if the Hokage tried anything in the situation then even if he won he would lose overall.

Hope to see more soon, when’s the next chapter going up?

so... one day... will this ever be updated?