Reviews for No, You Shouldn't Have
Stydealized chapter 1 . 11/5/2017
I love this story! But...where's the post? I was trying to find it.
Dino-ogue chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
Ah, love the ending; bitter and hurtful words before now turned to teasing, sweet ones. The three Amigos, irreplaceable, inseparable, unbreakable. I'm sure Joaquin and Maria were floored after finding out just what exactly had caused all their troubles to begin with; what role that blasted medal played in it all, or rather, who, exactly, had absolutely everything to do with... well, everything that had happened! Wow, this is why I adore the film. The Book of Life lives up to its title to the fullest. The story is filled with life, love, beauty, and gem-like lessons worth treasuring for life. All that is good can be seen and found in the tale of the two gods of death and the three friends living in a quaint Mexican town. And this piece... oh, the feels! I very much enjoyed this! Lovely one shot!
pen-for-sword chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
True love's kiss, LOL XD

I love how beautifully written this was — all the emotions perfectly displayed. It's a work of art :)
Avi chapter 1 . 8/6/2015
cuuuute - I totes wish there were more OT3 stories like this 3
Qapleulia chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
I teared up during this
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
Love your story :D so sad, heart warming and cute at the same time! Well done compadre!
PF chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
So sad but so cute! I looooved it
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
I loved that movie!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
I loved your writing in this story. It was amazing! You should make more fanfics for this story. I'll defeinitly read
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
Please make another chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
This story was so well written and detailed. I loved it! I'll defenitly read more if you make another.
WritingDoodle chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
This is really a very beautiful story.
The writing flows wonderfully and the usage of present tense adds to the frantic tone of the beginning, sorrowful tone in the middle, and peaceful tone at the end. Everything was just perfect. I love how you wrote Joaquin, it's so in character and I really do wish something like this was added into the movie.
Overall, though, I really love this! You did an amazing job.
WhateverI'maPerson chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
This was amazing! This is a total headcannon of mine and you depicted it perfectly. Great Job!

FR
Nagasha chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
So cute! Jaoquin is likable and the three of them together is adorable! I know I wasn't the only one who came out of the movie thinking OT3.