| Reviews for Betrayal |
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   TwiTwiAgain chapter 52 . 2/5 Thank you for sharing your writing talent. |
| TwiTwiAgain chapter 38 . 2/5 Haha! Love how you explained Drabble fic to readers. For years I never read drabble, but found one with a bazillion reviews I wanted to read. So yes, like anything there is good drabble and average or even bad fic. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/27/2019 So Bella is slutty |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2019 How do you pernounce her last name? Galizia? Gal-I-zia? Gal-zia? Ga-zia? Either way, its a weird last name. |
| TheEasternWind chapter 43 . 7/26/2019 Love how short the chapters are. But it feels repetitive. It's just Bella not thinking things through and acting impulsively with Edward cleaning up afterr her and yelling at her. |
| peahensquill chapter 38 . 5/23/2019 Yes, awesome illustration! |
| Kesme chapter 43 . 1/2/2019 I swear Bella irritates me so much-Love this story but doesn't she know by now that this is not her realm? |
| Kesme chapter 33 . 1/2/2019 I get that its Bella's brother but didn't she just say she needed to admit that she's out of her element? This most definitely will not go well and Edward will NOT be happy |
| blondferretgirl chapter 52 . 10/10/2018 Love It! |
| Icewomen chapter 52 . 6/5/2018 Great story on to next part |
| Icewomen chapter 19 . 6/5/2018 I'm just starting this and know that there is a whole lot more to read and seems like a great story but sad that she gave in so soon just for sex |
| MiccaF chapter 52 . 4/24/2018 Excellent! Going to check out the sequel! |
| Justchillingandliving chapter 14 . 3/16/2018 I like this Bella, she's very strong, looking forward to seeing where this goes |
| Loveforgreeneyes chapter 38 . 1/11/2018 Funny! Great chapter and explanation. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2017 Love the start, straight into it. You have me hooked already! |
