Quite a nice story, no criticism here. It has been very pleasent reading your tale.
Just one question: why is this story rated M - there is no greater violence nor sexual content described.

Plz post more!

i love the whole story. this all seems like exactly something that Ahsoka would do once she leaves the order. Her emotions seem accurately depicted here and i can picture her facial expressions and her actions almost perfectly. She would be so emotional after everything that just happened with the Jedi order and Barriss' betrayal that i think seeking out Lux is exactly what she would do and it's what she should have done in canon because it makes sense for her in her fragile emotional state to stay clear of the fighting. hopefully you will resume writing someday soon!

please update

Nice story. Hope there’s more some day.

This is a truly amazing story! I too am a nerd and always thought these two should be together. I like how they do nothing gross or anything like that. And I enjoyed the appearance of Anakin and Padme'.I would like to subscribe or sign up or something but I am some where in the area of 13 so...but thank you alot for your service(my great uncle served)and happy writing!

I know this is shit even though I haven’t read it yet

This is a wonderful fanfiction so far and I hope soon you could update it! :)

Did Ahsoka actully laugh out loud? Cause that would be amusing.

This atoey has made my sqeal with delight a few times now. I love this story. Have I mentioned that yet? I don't think I've mentioned it yet.

Poor Lux and Ahsoka, they both blame themselves for Stella's death:(

Padme, you are a good friend to Ahsoka. And Anakin, you should leave the jedi order too! DON'T FALL TO THE DARK SIDE! MAKE THE JEDI ORDER CHANGE AND ADAPT, BECOME BETTER! Sorry, lst my emotions and wishful thinking take full control for a moment there...

I...poor Anakin and Ahsoka...

*facepalm*

Uhh...