And it sounds like Bill got his wish. Not only is Dipper dead, Bill has gained control over the world. Dear lord, this whole story has gotten steadily dark.

Wow, that was amazing. I normally hate letters stories. (You know where the whole thing are just letters from character to character) But this one really gave me a fell of what was going on. I ️ your stories :)

wow nice

You did great showing the progression of Dipper's breakdown just through letters. That kind of thing isn't always easy to do, so I'm impressed. I feel so bad for poor Dipper, and Mabel too. :( Nice work!

I am so impressed with this story

Please do some kind of continuation.

Holy mother bucking hay. Wtf Mabel. Wtf.

Very tragic indeed... I love it! I just dig in dark and angsty Gravity Falls fics. The mystery and suspense is such intriguing. What we have here is one of those great stories about Dipper’s great demise. Great start. Awesome writer and all. I'm already an avid fan of yours. I've been reading your works long time ago, it's only fair that I get to review your work. You should really update ‘The Better Side of Me’. I love the first two chapters and I cannot wait for your imminent updating. Expect future feedbacks from me! Until then, happy writing!

Oh, the feels! ;-; You did a really nice job! ;D

*sobs* WHYYYYYYY?! I'm literally sobbing IRL (in real life) right now! This is written so well... and so tragic!

NUUUUU DIPPER! WHYYYYYYYY CURSE YOU BILL! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

Oh my God. This was amazing, amazingly creepy and scary. I think I remember that the original Dracula novel was written like this. We could literally witness Dipper's descent into insanity. It was tragic when he begged for Mabel to come.

Great great great job Puma Panther. This is really something.

:D
I love it so much!
Even though I got a little scared there...
It's amazing! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT

I like but at te end... FUK YOU BILL

Oooooooo . . . . So that's what happens. NNNNOOOOOOOOOO! DAMN YOU, DORITO MAN! You know something, if Sam and Dean Winchester were to stop by Gravity Falls, they'd have all it's problems solved in like a week. Maybe less. But a guy can dream. And use the power of Fanfiction to make it happen, which I'm trying to but I can't figure out how to get the story started. Anyway, good story, if not a bit dark. Stay awesome, and I will see YOU . . . in the next chapter. Bye-bye!