Yay! Its great to find a writer who really gets these characters and then I look at your profile and you have more In Plain Sight stories! So pleased I found your work :-)

LOVE this! This is so true to their characters, just how I could see it going between them.

Loved "his lis crashed over hers." Says so much about the feelings behind the action. Loved Mary's Halloween treat for Marshall!

Always more!

Loved Marshall peeking in on Mary before knocking on the door. Trick or treat indeed! Great that M&M got the treat at last.

So it's on with the party for Abigail? She doesn't seem too hurt. Marshall finally has his priorities straight!

Really cold - when Kenny says Mary is no one. Love that Norah's new word is Doof.

Loving it! Woo woo on the update.

Mary spooked by a Halloween party? Probably terrified at the prospect of having to make nice with people she barely knows, let alone come up with a rediculous costume. What's not to hate?

Super!

Busted. Think this Kenyy-Guy is just a f*ckbuddy. And I dont like the relationship Marshall has with Nancy Drew. Dont like her at all.