Awwwww, so sweet! I loved it!

Awwww! This is so sweet! I love Nalby too, as you can see from my username haha :) I hope you write more!

Aww! That was sweet, and obviously a blatant attack on my feels (how dare you) but it was really good. You're a very good writer and I was really impressed.

And on that note, I adore your username. It's lovely. Keep up the good work!

Sweet! A little bit too short... You could take your time of describing the situation and emotions, but I liked through...

So good job!

OMG FEELS

I love this! Great writing!