Wait is this story based off another show but using the Rwby characters? Anyways, The story was intriguing but it's a shame to see this come to an end, I feel like an Epilogue would be nice to end off this storyline, describing what the rest of their summer together would be like but that's just my opinion and that's up to you as well.

Very nice, although sudden I still like it, I think an epilogue would do some good in the sense of having a bit more closure. But that is up to you, anyway I look forward to whatever you write next.
Glynda

What do you mean the last episode of the anime? Did you base this RWBY fanfic off another show? I must've missed that note.

Not bad but if you could have stretched it out I do think it would have increased the significance of it. keep it up. ;)

this is amazing

The image of Weiss drooling made me crack up, how would you get this idea, its awesome! xD
Poor, Blakey, Weiss should definitely help her, although i have the feeling she could make things complicated..
Keep you amazing work up! ouo

Nice development on the story. If you could make them longer that would be great. Other wise, keep it up! ;)

This is getting good! I can't wait to read more

This Is A Very Nice Fan Fiction Can not Wait For Ch. 10

I was going to say that this really reminds me of Sasameki Koto but then I was lurking through the other reviews and saw that you wrote that you did based this off it and was planning to alter stuff. Oh well, I still like reading this as infuriating as it was to read/watch sasameki when the two took forever to confess... which is exactly how I feel right now about ruby and weiss.

Geez even i wonder how ruby feels : /

I think I may have missed a chapter but I'm not sure, is Ruby interested in Weiss now? can you please fill me in on that 'm kinda confused.
Glynda

Sasameki Koto?

Nice, I would like it if you could possibly publish chapters a bit faster or make them longer. keep up the good work. ;)

Poor Weiss, love is hard.

Can't wait for chapter 7, keep up the great work!