Reviews for Fire and Fury |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2014 Ermahgerd that was so hot *w* |
Lyswenn chapter 1 . 11/7/2014 Awwwh, that was sort of cute in a weird way? :P I really like the chemistry between those two, they both seem so playful. I love Yayoi's line, "is that all you've got to show me?". I just couldn't help but grin like an idiot at that. This is why I love them. Haha. If you want constructive criticism, I only got one complaint: the beginning, the lack of explanation, as small as it could be. I mean, I know that it's supposed to be short and all but I think it would have been interesting to actually start with Shion checking Yayoi out and "slowly" explained how she got her trapped. Though I guess that would've been hard to do so that's alright. :P - Your French counterpart/waifu :D |
hollie maiden chapter 1 . 11/6/2014 loved it c: |
KuroToraHime chapter 1 . 11/6/2014 This! This was one of the hottest yuri I've ever read! I kind of imagined Shion and Yayoi to have this kind of relationship. It was perfect! Please feel free to write some more. |