Absolutely wonderful chapter. Great ending. Looking forward to the epilogue, where I will give my full review of the story.

i enjoyed that very much. Tobias chose to go factionless, and Tris chose to stay in abnegation. that's how they meet. i believe all the characters make an appearance (zeke, christina, will, max, peter, etc.) there are some unexpected deaths (you have been warned), and some characters are OOC (out of character), and there are some very sad parts between Tris & Tobas. but you have to trust the author - it is a happy ending. very well written.

happy ending! see my review for the epilogue for full review.

Oh man - what a heart-wrenching chapter. good, but puts you thru the wringer.

Well...that's not too bad of a sentence. I mean honestly, he did shoot & kill ? So yeah, the sentence is more than fair, in my opinion.

Oh my, that was completely unexpected!

I hate Jeannine, but then again, we're supposed too. Wish she would get injected with the fear serum. Would love to see fee fears.

Caleb - you are such a stinker, and that's putting it mildly!

Oh my - what a cliffhanger!

Wonderful chapter. loving this story.

Way to man up Tobias! Good for you.

Oh my! But I must say, I'm not all that surprised. Jeannine is one evil lady.

Oh my - another cliffhanger! Natalie can take care of herself though - she may be abnegation but she came from dauntless, so she can definitely hold her own.

Natalie is one smart woman. She won't believe anything Jeannine tells her! And neither will Andrew. And I sure hope Tobias didn't do what we all think he did.

Oh my...that's a bit of a cliffhanger.