Love it soooo much. This chapter is perfect!

Love it. Bela kicking Edward 's Ass.

Awesome

Awrsome

Please update. This is amazing!

my favorite bella ever

This is so amazing it’s so passionate I absolutely love this interesting that bella has with the imprint and I so wish you would continue with the story I love the way that Jacob is park
I love the simple words pack home safety and how deep in stinks of fantastic and it shows maybe what a real kind of Wolfpack is like

I pray that you continue your writing is absolutely fantastic and I really appreciate reading this

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Tests was newly dead by venom from both then too late adapted as a Vampire slayer with venom then had no memories then was hunting to replace what I Lost then so they found then Chained with them then ATOMIZED With b oth with them with more as all of them IMPALED More blowen were in NASA Bodysuits right in to hearts crashed frely first eath then tore from herewith them then Blazing were Charred flash/all bring them then brought here then Atom ized murdered them for real then suddenly the cause of death was murder then too late wasa not mortal the Venom of both us/them go freely of the snow ice water rain hail and water and oceans and sand mud dirt then and sea made us/them strongest but more powerful underwent a alien change then too late wearing from Terminator 2 Judgement Day then too late were in fact not humans gotten a raging headache focused treaining hardest she's a Mental shield with you then had a planetary ablity then ring was cursed so theirs able to go in sunlight eyes were Golden mixed too later were in fact not alive then myself was Athletic fit but powerful but well- more ton ed then the pieces were still healed but had manners alert was undead forever the bodies were delivered with blood now killed uh oh my eyes turned Black aas night was mighty thirty used my tracking skills to stalk my prey then Jumped then caught my meal a Lynx my food then too late was really hissing viciously drained as all of it then used the tal-shaya to kill it then so they now were as all of the animals dried up had very good hunting manners burierd it very well the very as all of it then Were as all of states then caused young protected by us/them was stark hungry hunting like a Cold one then were as all then too late were not alive Nuked freely freed from here brought here then too late killed were as all of more as all guaeds poisoned then suddenly a goddess released from sleep was Bellona goddess of Starfleet and United Federation of planets oh my god they done to all of them were with us/them most you can't breed but you were dead are Immortal now too late were as all of more as all of them were immortal by now as all of them a light suddenly forged my sword wasa indeed with out a rival stopped aging nev er gone elderly or die or went old had enhanced strength heighten senses and cute hearing was powerful looked healthiest ten blowe were as all of most as all of them brought here then suddenly Holes as all of them that too late felt a dep fiery buzzing alien noise Alice I Can't die will have no rival I Am Immortal but with you as all of you are dead years back yikes then too late the damages done to ourselves looked youthful but young-looking age sixty five to one hundread and thirtty two or more gasp she never dies of it now too late stopped living but never died of the n west blood made us/as all of them Augments fully time was official then too late the families tribes aged of us/them were not aging truest fulliest time then too late were in fact the tribe who left dressed from a bad science fiction TV Series who is that gorilla he's Muscular ulp he's toned oh no our pets had young cat had kittens/Dogs had puppies Harrrrummph he grumbled was grumbling A-Hem then now too late the young were with us/them.

This is great. I would love a Jacob POV!

Love Paul.

Perfection. Well done.

Leah!

You are an amazing writer!

Eddy is a creeper!?

Charlie is awesome.