Interesting

This was really sweet :) great job

Aww! :'D that was so cute, I love this!

That "in the dark" action was so hot. I loved how they went from being playful to being passionate. You wrote that transition very realistically.
I love that episode, great chemistry and moments between the boys and I like how you wrote parts of the episode into your fic. Well done!
Please write more smut. You are very good at it!

This was great. Loved how Merlin was playing with Arthur in the dark, licking his foot and palm. Also liked them pushed up against the wall outside. Really hot. Good job. ;)