Awww :'(... It's just too bad that this has not updated but I respect it that you still have your own life to deal with. You are writing this for fun and I thank you for giving us this wonderful story. The LawLu fire and I mean the whole OP fandom is so hype during PH and Dressrosa arc. I am losing some of nice Law stories to read, too.
Again, thanks for the effort you exert in writing this :).

This is such a fucked-up reunion. It's such a bad timing that Luffy had met his gang at that moment. At least they know that Luffy is safe. Oh, I'm so excited for a LawLu reunion :).
Hmm, seems like Brook is the only one who got successful against the Family. Kind of reminds me how it was Brook who had tricked Big Mama in the poneglyps.
Sanji's use of gun reminds me one time how he draw one out against Robin. I kind of miss that.

I love how you wrote Law's resilience in this chapter. This is the personality that was shown in Dressrosa arc which I greatly admired.
I like it how you make Doffy a little nice here. It was quite nice how he chooses Law over his Family. Although, I find it a little creepy how he called Law as a sexy little raven. It's kind of sensual.
This is getting so exciting. Seems like there will be a reunion in the next chapter :).

I love this chapter :). I love how you write the Family here. Doffy is so scary but so cool (LOL! I think this is the first time I used something positive for Doffy). Devil fruits doesn't exist in this world but you had creatively used other fighting styles that are quite similar to their abilities.

That was such an extreme torture scene. Even I got cringed when I imagined Law experienced that. However, this is getting so exciting since Doffy is meant for blood. Oh! I'm so shaking right now.

This was such an angsty chapter. Although I find it funny how Nami's alias varies on every Strawhats. It was a small effort not to relay too much information about them just in case their captive escapes. The Strawhats maybe strong but just Doflamingo said, they are just small fry since their methods are just plain and basic.
If the Strawhats just investigated further, they might know the connection between Law and the doctor who is involved in the hospital. If they had just known that Law is just trying to protect Luffy, then this must have gone in a different direction.
So excited since Doflamingo is on the move. No one messes with his favorite godson after all.

This is such an amazing chapter :). I love how you switched the scenes among the characters just to see the glimpse on what was happening to them.
I really enjoyed reading the interrogation scene. Even though Law inflicts so much physical damage, his mind is just so strong. Doflamingo and Vergo had trained him so well. Quite interesting though that no matter how he hated Doflamingo, he still had this gratitude over the man who took care of him.

It was such a bad timing. It was quite bad how Luffy experienced a nightmare just at the same time when Law decides to clear his mind out. Looks like five years of having a 'normal' life had caused him to be caught off-guard on this situation. This is getting so exciting :).

Wonder when will Luffy regain his entire memories since he is having snippets of it. He kind of remembers something about Zoro and Franky but has been unable to make a connection. Kind of cute for Law to be protective over Luffy most especially about his delicate situation.
I like it how you introduce the Family. They are such an amusing bunch. I don't know if I missed Gladius here, I can't seem to find him (lol).

That was a nice introduction for Luffy's gang and their personality is still intact. However, since this plot is loosely based in Marineford arc, so their ages should be the same before yhe 2 years time skip. Did you just deaged some of the Strawhats? You had described Robin, Franky, and Brook as teens which I believe that these three are older than Law in OP.
I love reading LawLu interaction. Quite amusing how he enjoyed Luffy's company compared with the Family's. Also, even though Law dislikes Doffy, I really like it how Doffy called him as his favorite godson. I believe Doffy spoils him so much when Law was just a kid.

Oh, so Bepo is a cute adorable stuffed toy. Quite cute that Law still loves fluffy toys and how he let Luffy borrowed it. Law maybe a little bit OOC but I don't mind that he is such an adorable cinnamon roll.
Old habits die hard, eh. Kind of surprising that Law had a handgun under his pillow which leads me to a conclusion that Doffy really trained him to be a part of the Family.

Luffy may have lost his memories but he still had this instinct to recognize a person to trust, just like OP Luffy. Also, Luffy is somehow more attentive since he had been able to listen with Law's explanation about force and momentum without falling asleep or interrupting Law that he was bored.
I love it how Law shows concern over Luffy's welfare. It is like he opts into adopting Luffy which I think is beyond his jurisdiction as a patient's doctor.

No matter what kind of universe it is, Doflamingo is always there to put Law back into his grasp. He's so possessive that makes him creepy.
Poor Luffy :(. A human brain is quite delicate to handle such trauma. Though Luffy lost some or most of his memories, it's quite funny how he remembers that eat more than thrice a day. Kind of remembered in Alabasta arc wherein he said that he forgot to eat 15 meals (about 5 meals a day) within those three days.

I think, this is not the kind of first meeting that I wanted for Law and Luffy. It is not that I don't like it, it is just that I am accustomed to their fluffy first meeting. Quite bad that if Luffy wakes up, aside from feeling pain due to the loss of his brother, he might feel hate towards Law (based on his reaction before losing consciousness).

Maybe I am living in the rabbit hole when this story was published, lol. This is just a first chapter but it is already filled with angst. For a good doctor, it is quite painful to lose a patient while trying to save him. But as they say, fate can sometimes be cruel.