Reviews for RWBY and the Deathberry |
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Guest chapter 8 . 6/19 I really hope this story will be continued even though it doesn't look likely but a person can hope |
Guest 1 chapter 8 . 6/18/2019 good story hope you can continue someday |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/5/2018 Ichigo gets out of bed and he gets a team with winter,two of the malachite after junior fired them |
Joey394 chapter 8 . 7/30/2018 More plz |
Random guy chapter 8 . 7/13/2018 And u were never heard from again god that happens alot to these stories huh get me all interested and bam it's the end no more chapters go into a corner and think about what you just did |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2018 If you don't live for yourself, at least live for others. |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/23/2018 Mmmmm. Lies. |
KRAKEN - Excalibur Galantine chapter 1 . 1/3/2018 this needs to be continued |
David Brown chapter 8 . 11/23/2017 It's been a couple of years, and this fic may be dead, but it's a good fic and deserves to be continued. I keep thinking about Ichigo making sashimi one day, causing Blake to go into a purring frenzy. I have a theory. The Quincy are killing hollows in a manner that prevents their souls from being recycled in Soul Society. This is not only the cause of the grimm, which have no souls, as there aren't enough for them to use, and also the faunus, which are animal souls reincarnated into human-animal hybrids. |
T0PH4T chapter 8 . 11/5/2017 So, this story is pretty rough, not going to lie. You have some questionable character decisions, plotting/Mary Sue issues, as well as frequent situations that break suspension of disbelief. That said, I’m still here. Why? Because you understand how to mix two VERY different worlds, while clearly having the attention to detail to keep away the rampant spelling/grammar issues I see so frequently elsewhere. That, and I am genuinely interested in what happens next, which is why I’m running through some (blunt honesty incoming) fairly bad prose. I’d like to beta for you, but part of that would be planning out the story ahead of time, as well as a few edits to the first few chapters. Hope I didn’t come across as a complete asshole, because that was not my intention. |
SilverSpark chapter 8 . 9/18/2017 Update! Now! |
CRAZYD1AMOND chapter 7 . 7/13/2017 vary interesting so ichigos blades are in magazine that will be funny see ichigo reaction to his blade being in a Museum somewhere lol |
Random chapter 8 . 2/23/2017 When will you return good sir the story I very good |
Drunken Sarge chapter 8 . 12/30/2016 Hey 'Guest', you wouldn't know a good story if the author printed it off, rolled it up and beat you over your stupid friggin head with it. You are so far off in your assessment...well, I doubt you could properly analyze a grocery list. Damn troll. Stop wasting space and other people's time. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2016 Subpar authorship. Boring story, unnecessary detail, broken pacing and action, unnatural dialogue. |