| Reviews for Five Alarm Death March |
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   Saubree chapter 2 . 4/21 Puffff this was glorious. Alternate is actual ending, that's what my heart is telling me |
| Hiniwalay chapter 1 . 8/20/2018 Damn |
| KKVixen chapter 1 . 3/19/2017 I can't read the next chapter. I felt that in my bones. When he said he wanted his baby brother back, my stomach felt like it got kicked. This was good, but it hurt way too much. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2016 WEll...i almost cursed you with both...because seriously the pain brought into my heart. |
| LiteratureGirl12 chapter 2 . 5/20/2016 I like this ending WAY better. |
| thisisaccountisnolongerinuse chapter 2 . 2/15/2016 Man. MAN. MAN OH MAN OH MAN. This is intense! Almost too much for me! I love it! Amazing! You are and awesome writer! Keep up the incredible work! |
| Lucillia chapter 2 . 1/30/2016 Damn. Both of those are so sad. Sad, but good. |
| Fairygirl34 chapter 2 . 1/7/2016 I loved both versions! I'm glad that you put up the original one as well. I think I like the first chapter just a bit more but both were incredibly amazing! |
| Guitar Amateur chapter 2 . 10/31/2015 Even though the violence was horrid, taken in revenge, I love the realistically rendered story of Tadashi's grief of Hiro's murder. Thank you for exploring the possibility. |
| 1310 chapter 2 . 10/30/2015 ... |
| PhaseConstant chapter 2 . 5/30/2015 Damn. Both of these were really intense. And made me want to cry just a little bit. ...Okay, maybe a lot. |
| Fyoex chapter 2 . 4/4/2015 Very interesting! |
| Red Star chapter 2 . 3/21/2015 Very well written, very sad, very intense, very good. |
| Silver-09 chapter 2 . 3/18/2015 Um, wouldn't that leave him to fall if leaning on him and stating that phrase? |
| Silver-09 chapter 1 . 3/18/2015 Got to "he doesn't care" and screamed finish him so loud. |
