Nice

amazing as always

why is this Christmas the only time spent together? Harry was 2 years old when Albus charmed their memory.

As always, terrific story.

Aaah, that was satisfying.
Well done indeed. I do prefer your other multiple parts fic as the pacing seems better there so it's obvious to me that you grew a lot as an author.
That does not mean that this story wasn't fabulous though.
I loved it immensely and can't wait to start reading part 3.
Thanks for your efforts!
MS

Aaah! You zigged when I was sure you would zag! You got me. No Lockhart, just Snape to the rescue.
dang, I had hope for Harry to fight the basilisk as he had, though it's nice that he has a dad he can depend on.
To the epilogue!
MS

Very, very smart of you to have Hermione not be petrified so she has the duty to go get a teacher. That means Harry is at least semi responsible and my guess is that the teacher Hermione will fetch wil be Lockhart, no?
Brilliant
MS

Ha! A million points from Gryffindor :)
You crack me up, silly thing. While I love drama and angst and such, the occasional humoristic one-liner really makes a story better. You have a great sense of humour, really.
Also, no polyjuice potion after all! Oh well.
I do wonder what will happen next.
MS

Yeeeeees! You're doing the polyjuice potion! I was hoping you would.
That ought to have hilarious results.
I loved the Snape teasing with the Weasley jumper that backfired. Hilarious.
More!
MS

Yes! Albus DumbleSnow! I just had to stop reading and laugh at that for a while. Brilliant as ever.
And so gosh darn sweet, too. I loved the story of their first Christmas together.
*sigh* did I mention you're brilliant?
MS

Howler please! Percy's a jerk. I mean, like, really he's a jerk. In any story. Please howler him! I can just imagine it. PERCIVAL WEASLEY YOU SHALT BE COMING TO THE CHRISTMAS PARTY. ALSO YOU WILL BE GROUNDED. NO LEAVING YOUR DORM UNLESS ITS FOR CLASSES AND MEALS. ONE OF THE PROFESSORS WOULD YOU BE SO KIND TO ESCORT HIM TO ALL HIS CLASSES? Ginny again , good job for griffindor. AND PLEASE TAKE AWAY HIS BADGE.

Famous last words... Brilliant story! Absolutely loved it! I kinda hoped there would be a little more action down in the chamber, it all happened to fast. But was all tied up in a nice little bow! Well done! Thank you for sharing

Asking the question 'What can go wrong?' is just fate's temptation.

: )

I think you did a great job with Percy's attitude and his being influenced by the diary! Well done!