Reviews for Parallel Worlds
Antoinette Veronica chapter 14 . 7/8/2017
A happy and heart warming end to your Cherry Blossom series. I love how you integrated real life locations in it.

I love your description of Hikaru's family and friends , it was obvious she is well loved, surrounded and enjoy doing things with them. Kuu and Satoru are in love, yay!

I thoroughly enjoy Lantis and Zagato' s relationship here, the part with Lantis mercilessly teasing Zagato is really cute, just like what a little bro would do, and i like the part with him regretting it. Zagato displays his thoughtful and caring personaloty by always look out for Lantis and encouraging him to follow his love. Then that part with Hikaru being intimidated by Zagato is a nice touch, it reminds readers of the canon.

I love your stories and your style. Keep up with your good work !
James Birdsong chapter 14 . 7/1/2017
Nice
luna.alondra10 chapter 14 . 6/19/2017
Es hermoso el fic, me encanta y que no te de pena, yo tengo muchas obras pero nunca inicio con algunas xD la inspiraciĆ³n llega pero no me deja terminar una historia xD
shinomu chapter 14 . 6/18/2017
It was an incredibly sweet ending! I think I read it in spanish already, but it was wonderful reading it again.
James Birdsong chapter 13 . 3/31/2016
Nice chapter.
James Birdsong chapter 12 . 1/11/2016
Cool
James Birdsong chapter 11 . 12/5/2015
Thanks for the stories.
Antoinette Veronica chapter 11 . 11/24/2015
It is a sweet but sad story. I love that part when Ryu was trying to pick up the courage to kiss his beloved and he was looking forward to it until it all went wrong. Your description of Ryu's thoughts as he noticed that Hanami was unusually late and then he dashed into the palace only to see all the inhabitabts killed are very detailed and realistic.

Then somewhat fortunately, Ryu managed to get to Hanami before she breathed her last, and the confession of Hanami was tragic and beautiful. And this time, i feel somewhat glad the couple could go to heaven together
Wolfvas K'Vala chapter 9 . 9/16/2015
Welcome its fun to follow and watch the changes in chapters and ideas. The love you write between them is deep and always very well thought out.
James Birdsong chapter 8 . 9/2/2015
Nice stories of course.
Antoinette Veronica chapter 8 . 8/30/2015
A night of stargazing is a really nice activity for a couple!

I love how you described the stargazing date between Hikaru and Lantis, the little details of the lovers' interaction with each other.

The sweetest thing was Lantis shooting discreet glances at Hikaru and also the lovers felt they are so in love, even a moment of silence was not an awkward thing, because they simply enjoyed the company of each other.

There are no shooting stars in Cephiro? What a pity! So Earth still has some nice things Cephiro doesn't have!

My heart simply melted when Lantis looked at Hikaru with his eyes so filled with love that he decided that even the beauty of the meteor shower was no match to his beloved.

I also smiled when i read Hikaru stood at her door dazed, being overwhelmed with love and joy from Lantis' goodbye kisses, Lantis saying the night was enjoyable because of Hikaru...aww. ..so sweet and heartwarming!
Antoinette Veronica chapter 7 . 6/8/2015
Nice shot, it is fun to read Hikaru having an adventure in Cephiro, not surprised she could get so popular there, and that would certainly make up for her previous experience with the civilians of Cephiro.

She should not have walked through unfamiliar terrain alone! But of course, her knight in shining black armour saved the day, it is sweet. Lantis surely has a sharp intuition so he could watch out for his beloved.

Such a cute, sweet story, keep up with the good work!
Firestorm-244 chapter 6 . 6/6/2015
Good chapter! Who was watching her hmmm?
Antoinette Veronica chapter 5 . 6/4/2015
What a sweet story, I can never get enough of stories featuring siblings love!

You captured perfectly the feelings of the Shidou brothers towards their sister and i love they thinking Hikaru was the most precious thing ever.

The part with Hikari coming to the family is a bonus!

I am curious about Hikaru's mum though, have you thought about adding her?
shinomu chapter 6 . 6/4/2015
Oh, such a sweet piece! I love the part where he watches her movements as someone in the same field of expertise. Also, the little details about the legend of the Magic Knights is realy great. Aw, I should be the one thanking you for your writing!
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