When I spot something beautiful, I can't help and love it. When I see well written work, I can't help and enjoy it, thank you for sharing this wondering one shot. Brotherly moment between Raph and Mikey, something that was desperate needed in the episode.

Awww. Good Raph, you get a pizza. He really grew this past season...You can tell he's trying to be a better brother. Nicely done :)

The ending made me smile. Great characterizations.

This is a nice portray of Raphael. Here we see inwardly how Raph really feels about how he treat Mikey. We know he is emotionally torn and actually thinks less of himself than he does of Mikey. Yet when interacting with Mikey, the walls come back up and we see the angry and annoyed Raph we all know and love. I like how you've shown some character growth with Raph by having him verbally express his appreciation of his little brother. Nicely written here. And the whole "are you being sarcastic" bit was priceless and totally something I could see taking place between the brothers. Great job :)

This is a wonderful little piece! Raph has been through so much at this point in the series, and his actions show that he's maturing. This scene that you've created on the roof of the farmhouse is a perfect putting together of many of the pieces of Raph's life that are helping him (or forcing him, depending on how you look at it) grow up. Thumbs up!

I think I just had an "awww" moment here. This is so touching and sweet- especially for Raph. Loved it.

That was so emotional and amazing! You got Raph just right, his guilt, the way he had to be strong. It was all just fantastic!

Ah...this is so cute. I love this.

loved this! I was hoping for something like this in the episode but alas. This was satisfying though, great job! Maybe if you feel like it, you can do something from leo and donnie's p.o.v since they were also mean...but this is great!

This would have been such a perfect scene to add to the end of the episode. I seriously wonder if the show hadn't been a Nickolodeon show and with the goal of keeping things lighter and more upbeat if they would be willing to indulge in these angsty moments. Alas, this more than scratched the itch for such a scene. Great job!

Somehow I think I wouldn't have been so irritated at yet another Mikey episode about the others not appreciating him if it had ended like this. Love this little addition - for me it was much needed, and you handled it brilliantly. It's a sweet moment that feels true to the characters. Nice work!

Awesome story and a great way to patch up the conflict between Raph and Mikey. Granted, Raph did hug him and say he was glad Mikey was back, but this was just so well done. I think that's what I love about fan fiction. It gives you the chance to fill in the gaps and add something more. Nicely done on this.

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Awww! I liked it! :D

Awwww! I love it! It's so cute and full of brotherly fluff. Great job. So going in my favorites list.

Awwww, these two! Together they are the chaos of the Hamato Clan, but every once in a while they level with each other and it's just adorable.