I loved this so far. I hope you continue it!

Stop dragging your feet and update or I really will jump thru my monitor!

Please! You have to update! You have left me hanging... That makes for a very unhappy BloodDove! Pleeeeaaassseeeeee! UP DATE!

With Love

Lady BloodDove

THE SILENCE SPEAKS

oh, this is getting interesting. More please? *looks at TamChronin with puppy dog eyes*

No... You MUST FINISH THIS STORY! O.o *chews on you to find out what happens next.*

~rozu

UPDATE! _

Yes I do want to hurt SOMETHING for that ending, but you're right in that if you died the story would not be finished. _ I hate logic.

Truely a fabulous story. But I wish there would be more "guarding" going on. They are called "guardians" for a reason.

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Sorry if that's sounds a little...uh...mean? I just have serious fangirl obsessions that sometimes make no sense at how to how they apply to what I just said...and you don't really need to have understood that because I didn't and I'm just rambling...

*Sweatdrop*

Anyway, I just like that whole "protected" thing. I know I'm a weirdo, DON'T LOOK AT ME LIKE THAT! *hides under table*

Yeah.

*cough*

Amazingly fabulously wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter. *smile that would fool anyone that I'm not a lunatic*

I enjoyed this 'fic because I've never in all my skimming on found Clow's personality rendered so well. Yue seems to me in this to be a little more Yukito-ish than he does in the future, but maybe that's because he splits himself up.
I'm incredibly glad Clow didn't actually physically sleep with his Uncle's wife, because that means Sakura and Li aren't quite as closely related as they may have been. And that is of the good! (Incest squickfest.)
Things I enjoyed most include the "test" in which Clow admits he wouldn't trade his guardian for the possibility of ressurecting his wife, the interesting play of politics in the Clan. Oh, and the shower scene.
It's a pity you stopped writing this in the May of '03 but I understand you have other obligations. Still, if you're ever willing to pick it up again, I'd love to see more.

It's nice to read a fic were the main character. Aww you seem to take the more background characters and give them a chance to shine in your fics. Not that Clow is really a background character considering if it wasn't for him there would be no CCS _;
I hope you get some inspiration to continue this story someday. _

hehe, just finnished this fic and i'm loving it, though, hehe, i am kinda wondering when he made his key/staff, and what words he uses, or if he uses any at all.
well i really do hope you can get the next chapter up soon, if not the next couple of 'em, cause i'd love to beable to read more of this, it's really good!

wow, beautiful, beautiful fic! there's not a lot of good fic out there and this's definately a good one! please have the next chapter up soon!

Ohohoho! I like it as well, Yue and Clow make an interesting couple. Also the way your protrayed Yue's dilema at feeling 'non-human' was perfect. n.n I love it.

Ah...such a nice fic...but why don't you update sooner?

Suggestions...suggestionz...why not make Yue fall in love with the socceress?(*hint* *hint* *evil grin*)

Or add something on the socceress?...relating her emotions...nice to see things from different views...maybe she captured Yue to get back at Clow...but since she was really lonely, and Yukito(was he there at that time...?)was so nice(that's what he was all the time) and caring(or whatsoever...sorry for being crappy) that she fell in love with him...but the bunny only loved Clow...or something like that...(*old story...*)

(warning...you might get killed by Yue/Clow fans...)

Well...forgive me for being so crappy...well, I'm just thinking that you ought to update this...it's one of those few beautiful fic (I'm not saying you aren't good...U write wonderful fic...but there's those few that are comparingly top ones, right?)

Arh...writing too much again...sorry...if you want to get back at me for writing too much, spend those words on writing ficz...

By-the-way, I'm half Chinese...(think of clow-san...arh...i'm not THAT powerful...not powerful at all...*giggle*...and the person who gave me my other half...guess yourself if you want.*hintguess from the state of my English*..yean...I know chinese too..*pity i'm only trying to learn japanesse.)so if you happen to be not of Chinese origin & need some background info or what...I'll be happy to help...(*shocked* er...do that sound too thick-skinned?)

AH! I've been staring at the bottom of the screen in disbelief for the past five minutes, hoping that my eyes are deceiving me, and that there really is another chapter for me to read...GAH! This story is amazing! My gosh, you write the best CCS fics on ! I hope you continue soon _

~G. Isis CXII

Ah, finally an update. Huh, I never thought that Madoushi might have gone this far. Pretty funny, that bit about him cleaning up his own messes. If he only knew...

Well, I bet he'll find them both in no time. She needs to be around him more if she's going to fall in love, right? Guess we'll find out.