Gahhhh why can't you write a healthy relationship between the two?! I still enjoyed it... What's that say about me?

This was almost as creepy as The Violinist's Daughter! Poor Christine, helpless to fight back or protest while Erik brushes her hair and plans their wedding... Dark, chilling stuff.

This was amazing! I know it says complete but it would be an amazing story to continue! The way you have portrayed Erik and Christine is very intriguing and I would love to read more! Great piece of work, well done and thanks :-)

Omyflippingoates! Why do you do this to me?!

Excellent! This was very well written for a short story.

Well, that was...for somethings short that was quite dark to think about. Being trapped within your own body wanting to to escape. So in this one shot there is no happy ending but I can't help but think if there would be a way out.