I love it please update!

So I know it’s been 5 years since you updated this but I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story. It’s hard finding good and original and well written fanfics out there and this is all of the above. Just wanted to let you know that I loved what you’ve written.

I know that it has been 4 years since an update. And I know in the last author’s note you mentioned how discouraging it is to have people beg you to update. However, I’m here to do exactly that. This story is SO beautifully written— plot is excellent, characters are all acting perfectly true to their character, and even your grammar is all correct (I can’t tell you how many other stories I started reading but couldn’t enjoy because of this). I love your story so much and would sincerely love an update if you are still in a place to give updates.
Thanks for your story and creativity, cannot wait to read more.

So I know it’s been a while but I hope you’ll continue this story. It’s been really good so far!

incredible! I'm so excited to see where this leads. I love how at first is was a hot intense burn, than it started
to slow down but the intense burn is still very prominent.

I know you haven’t updated this story in years, but I’ve just stayed up until 1:30am reading it all. You’ve got a lot of talent, and I didn’t even realize that I’d spent hours reading because of how much it captivated me. I know you’ve probably given up on this story, and probably forgotten about it, and I read your notes. I know how disheartening it can be to feel so much pressure for something that you do as a fun creative outlet. No one should pressure you to create your art, they should just appreciate what you’ve chosen to share. I really hope you choose to continue telling this story, because it’s got a lot of potential and I really want to see what happens next. I love seeing how well you’ve captured the dynamic between Clarke and Bellamy, and the personalities of the Delinquents in general. The plot is intriguing, and honestly I wouldn’t have been all too surprised if they had actually gone with a similar angle with the Mountains Men. And I really want to see what kind of hell Clarke and Raven we’re gonna raise in the next chapter. But I completely understand if you can’t, because you it should be something you want and are inspired to do, not something that you’re forced to. You don’t know me, and I don’t know you, but as one writer to another I really hope that this message at least made you smile. I can’t log into my account because I’ve honestly forgotten the password it’s been so long, but I hope to hear from you (through a story anyway, even if it’s not this one) soon.

- Lex ️

I hope that some day you decide to come back to this.

I think this is going to come up as “guest” because I don’t have an account but I’m not quite sure but my name is Sydney and I am not here to spread hate. Anyway, I have something to say to this writer...YOU ARE AMAZING! You have written 18 full, detailed, edited/checked, interesting, amazing, and overall awesome chapters for this story. I can’t believe the amount of dedication and work that you have put into this story. I found this story a few days ago and I have been hooked ever since and I did not even realize the amount of stress and hardships that you have been going through to make that happen. When I read an hour or two of this book because it is one of the most entertaining things ever, I can only imagine the amount of time it took you to think of, outline, create, write down, and publish the words that I read regularly. You are truly an inspiration to me with balancing your school work with trying to update story’s for your fans. Don’t ever let anyone tell you when to update or when to not because this is your book not theirs. Sending you lots of love because you deserve it! -Sydney

You just made a Taylor Swift reference like this is great

Thank you so much for this story! I’m so sorry you’re having trouble with people asking you to update all the time. It’s always hard when a story is really good but you can’t read all of it. That said, please take your time because this is an amazing story and I can’t wait to see where you take it from here! Thank you for your time and dedication.

It makes me sad when reviewers bully writers to return to their stories. As a reader I look at the last date a story was updated before reading it. A couple years tells me from the start that if this isn’t finished, you likely won’t be coming back and to start reading is at my own risk. Same thing if its been a couple of months—as often the writer has lost their muse. (I don’t write FF, but I have about 4 stories I’m avoiding revising and 2 altogether with avoidance of writing...) I follow just in case, but don’t expect to hear back.
Now that I’ve clarified where I stand... I wanted to say I really liked this story. It is very well written and you did a great job with character development in a way that didn’t scream OC. I haven’t read many 100 FF’s that center around Mt. Weather that I like, but I am intrigued by this story. I love the build you did of the Belarke relationship here and even appreciate the use of Murphy in some scenes—more scenes than I expected to see. (Many authors only write him as the murderous-bastard, but I like the 2nd chance Murphy so I was all for your inclusion of him.) Anyway loved the story.

The best fanfic to never end.

Omgggg I just discovered this story and it is amazinggggg! Will you continue the story even though its been 3 years ? Please ? I cant wait to read what comes next, Clarke's meeting with Dr. Tsing, Bellarke's relationship and the escape!

Man chill I think you over reacted to that comment. As a writer your gonna have people tell you stuff you don't wanna hear. You just have to ignore it and move on, not makea big deal about it.

Not sure if your still updating this or reading the reviews. Just wanted to say it’s a great story. Couldn’t stop reading until I finished it, now I’ll just have to go supply my own ending. Hope you continue writing, not just this story but others your really talented.