Great book! You should continue it. I'm not pressuring you or anything but this is a REALLY good book and it would be a shame if you would just throw it away. Good luck!

You're awesome, but you can't leave it there.

Damn! Those kids are brats... I don't think their parents were quite ready for this. And why isn't the "smart" parent actually trying to do something? Ha, smart... Talk about how love makes you blind to flaws. They are not trained very well at all! Anyway, I really like where this plot seems to be going and I really like your style. Hoping your revisions don't take long! I really want to see where the story is going.

*Blinks...O.O -.- O.O

Hi Lexithebug,

I just wanted to tell you that I really liked what I've read so far and to wish you good luck with your exams and scholarships (not sure what GED tests or ACTs are but I'm a foreigner anyway). I've never read a plot like this and I love your characterisation of Nico and Leo. Go Leo! I don't like Luke and Zoe but I suspect I'm not supposed to yet. I hope Roman Camp is better for Nico. Anyway your writing appears flawless to me as I didn't spot anything wrong with it.

I'll be clicking the next button now, and I hope you update soon.

Sadie

Do the gods remember Nico? 'Cause I always thought they might like him best, considering he never asks for a reward for whatever he does for them. Also, does Poseidon still take pride in Percy; I don't think he or Athena would be very proud of the Jacksons fore how they act.

OMG! It took me all my will power not to squeel as loud as possible when I saw your update! Really good and I can't wait for more and next time I will probably shed tears of happiness!

Please update.

YAY! I LOVE this story and it was one of my first fan-fictions on this website and I'm so happy your updating again! Can't wait for you to update again! :)

I hope you continue!

... I-it's ... Beautiful! Love it!

I understand how Percy can be seen as self-important, and his density hurt Nico. I'm just not used to seeing him (or his kids) be a bad person in a fic. It's a nice change, really. Percy being the "golden boy" is so over used. I think that (the original) Luke and Zoe would hate their namesakes. Luke was a great sword fighter, and Zoe was honorable. The children are neither of these.

Do people remember Bianca? Why does Nico not like the campfire?

What happened

And now he's in Camp Half-Blood. And Leo's there. Though, does he remember him or does he not? Anyway, it doesn't matter to me at the moment. I'm curious of what will happen next.

Update