It's not a very good fanfiction. The writing is not very good at all. The charcters dont interact well. Overall I hive it 4 out of 10.

It shit

Ok, I like this story, but just so you know, for like, improvement... Dagur is actually Heather’s BROTHER. I hope you can change the story up a bit because right now the Heather and Dagur thing doesn’t make much sense.

PS: Love your story!

I’ll give this the Benefit of the doubt but so far this kinda sucks, it has 0 story telling. It just spouts out that this is how it is with no lead up or anything. So far it’s not very promising

Serious Spider-Man vibes from this. Also ya may want to come back to these early chapters and re-work the grammar it isn't the greatest. all in all a decent story so far.

I tried, I really did, but I'm finding this story hard to suspense disbelief with... Particularly everyone's reaction to Hiccup waking up all of a sudden after 2 months, no ill effects, he's not weakened or anything and Gobber seems to just accept it like nothing happened, not even a double take of omg! You finally woke up!Sorry I'm not buying it, just don't hold for the way I see these characters. (yes I know he's been bitten and given these powers that make him strong, but I can't seem to find a compelling reason why there's no ill effects, not even a bit weak for a day or 2)

The story has potential, the summary sounded so intriguing but unfortunately I'm finding your style of writing and the characterization too jarring to read, so I will respectfully bow out of reading this.

A very nice story. I like it.

Hiccup and Camicazi

Can you make a sequel to humagom

A table for homina

Aww Night Rider would have been so cool tho

Hehe.. clever.
I like this
I'm just gonna keep reading.. good story.

No way! Hiccup's female counterpart!

HAH!

literally just...MOVIE REFERENCES AND 4TH WALL BREAKING!