Reviews for Broken pieces |
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Guardian-EMIYA chapter 2 . 7/20 I'll be honest here... I FUCKING HATE YURI but after reading this...it's too sweet dude... |
CatraMeowmeow chapter 1 . 5/24 My heart is breaking- |
EmperorRevan chapter 2 . 2/15/2018 Very sweet, I liked it and I'm not even a white rose fan! |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/20/2017 Aaaannnddd there goes my heart. It feels like you roundhouse kicked my feels in the crotch (I know, I have a beautiful way with words). But in all seriousness I loved that story. Thank you so much for writing it. I hope you make similar stories in the future, you really have a knack for it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2017 Wow. I felt like my heart was torn to shreds and repeatedly hit by a semi truck... ... which was awesome! I love fics that make me feel such strong emotion. |
MaliceUnchained chapter 2 . 5/15/2016 Hah! And you worry you can't do emotion? Damn, my friend, your stories just keep improving. Plots, writing, intimacy, emotion, everything - you keep getting better. this was excellent. Well done. |
vindictious chapter 2 . 8/14/2015 Even a billionaire can't buy happiness or love. Good one! |
vindictious chapter 1 . 8/14/2015 Yes, putting your work ahead of everything else will do that. Good story though. |
InductionMagnet chapter 2 . 7/17/2015 This was really good. I mean, it's tragic. Totally brought out the feels. But I feel unsatisfied. What happened next? Did they get back together? Ambiguous endings ain't cool, but I kinda feel it's your writing style, and I respect that. Thanks for the feels. |
Xuan Tian Shang Ti chapter 2 . 6/24/2015 Bravo, a great little piece. Not what I crave, but still stunning. I love the constructed contrast between the two characters. But I don't need to bang on about that, you already know...you wrote the thing :D So, as always thanks for writing, you're going on my favourite author list...unless I already did that and forgot...I have a condition ok? :P I kid, you're going there anyway, but not about the condition, I do have occasional short term memory loss, and I can't store well in my long term memory. Something about neuro-chemistry? Ahh well, keep it up and I'm off to stalk again. :P |
Xuan Tian Shang Ti chapter 1 . 6/24/2015 Hi again again...I'm not sure that's a thing :x Ah well. I like the way this is going, it promises to scratch the itch that I mentioned. Either way I think that this'll be a great little piece, so thanks for writing it. :) P.S. I really do like the fleshing out of characters, how you did their future personalities in a way that seems logical, but still slightly surprising. Please, keep up the good work. |
Jonathan chapter 2 . 12/15/2014 Sad story, but happy ending. I like it! |
Bolverikchan chapter 2 . 12/12/2014 I would totally read anything else like this. This was a wonderful read and could definitely be longer. |
ssjRandy chapter 2 . 12/8/2014 Do an alternate ending where Weiss chooses the company over Ruby |
sangheilitat117 chapter 2 . 12/8/2014 Bury me in the beautiful feels of this ending. |