A very well written story with Kyou and Tomoya. The pacing was steady, the characters were on spot, like Tomoya lying to help keep Kyou reputation steady, Kyou's spunky attitude and her caring side, you showed the consequences of their actions, the emotions they felt when someone else got in injured, and you even got the two to become boyfriend-girlfriend, rather than just having an even stronger platonic friendship. Well done.

Wow! This is such a good story. You did a really good job of capturing Tomoya and Kyou's personalities. I could definately read more of this.

Yah man that was really perfect! Do add some more chapters i u can.!

It's been a while since I searched for any Clannad stories, Kyou x Tomoya ones specifically since the only ones I found previously were mostly unfinished and forgotten. I'm glad I came across yours today. Fantastic read and I loved every part of it. This is the first time I've actually gone along with a story accompanied by music suggested by the author and I've got to say that the tracks you picked fit perfectly. I'd be very much interested in reading an epilogue if you ever decide to write one.

Keep up the good work!

LOVED IT PLZ MAKE A EPILOUGE

I found it a pleasant read that was short and sweet but did not feel rushed in any way.

I also enjoyed the soundtrack idea, the tracks were spot on for the mood of each part, while i understand the dislike of having to stop reading and change track Ive always liked the idea of having music that added to the mood in what i am reading and if someone didn't like it is simple enough to ignore.

would love to see more including the soundtracks

Daw Ain't that cute? I do love a good KyouxTomoya!

This was a very heartwarming read, pretty close to how events in Clannad would play out in my opinion. I could honestly see something like that happening. Gotta have just a little drama to something Clannad related after all.

I do feel like the soundtrack thing was unnecessary, out of personal opinion. I've read other stories which do that before, but I don't usually bother going along with them. Something about having to stop reading just to find the appropriate song so play, it ruins the flow. But on the other hand, something like that can easily be read over, so it isn't a problem.

I would be interested in an epilogue chapter if you would be willing to write it. There still are some loose ends that would need explaining, after all; Like how Ryou would react to it and such. I do hope you will!

Not great, but promising.