Great chapter

Oh wow, I don't know how I missed this one, but it was great! This was so hot and you did a terrific job. I'm so jealous of people like you that can write this stuff so well, because as much as I love reading it, it's really out of my comfort zone as far as writing goes.

Hi. I can see this happening between them eventually. The intimate encounter was well done in itself. I just think for this story it was rushed. Maybe if you had built up to it over a couple of chapters or even some short pieces but it was definitely too fast here. Be interesting though to see where you go from here.

Thanks!

This has to continue

All I can say is Wow!.

I love it! Please write more! I love their relationship and I love how you added the thoughts he had. I'd love to read another like this but with her thoughts!

Niiiiice. And such a lovely mental image. From your lips to God's (and TPTB) ear.

Very nice. .. Anything more?

loved this so much!

Amazing story! I really enjoyed it!

Wow. That uh escalated quickly...but good job...

I think this may be the first M rated Mortinez story. Regardless, well done my friend!

powerofthepen123:
Which is exactly what I said :D

I thought Iona was a blonde - I remember thinking how much she looked like Abigail.