so cute

This made me laugh! I loved it in the show and seeing this little excerpt for it was really cute! Loved how Shanks was so worried for him like a father! ;)

:)

Great story!

I liked it! It was well executed and written, albeit a tad short. That's a pretty interesting idea- I've never seen somebody write what happened after Luffy cut himself before. It's refreshing to see something original and new. Great job! :)