Reviews for The lost aura
MUILucario chapter 2 . 8/11
DBZA Goku: *gasps* That’s Disney evil!
MUILucario chapter 1 . 8/11
THIS... IS... SPARTA!
RiRi14 chapter 10 . 6/8/2019
Is Ash the one getting a harem If so do u plan to include Serena?
syakirmuhammad57 chapter 10 . 2/14/2019
awesome chapter and can't wait for the next update.
J the All Mighty Plot Master chapter 1 . 1/8/2018
Charizard is NOT a Pseudo-Legendary. Its a Starter
ReaperOfBalance chapter 10 . 12/27/2017
Nice chap, kinda hope ash helps them before trip can try and sleep with any of them
ReaperOfBalance chapter 9 . 12/27/2017
Nice chap
ReaperOfBalance chapter 8 . 12/27/2017
Nice job but if ash is supposed to be as strong as Nathan then this isn’t showing Nathan in that Good a light
ReaperOfBalance chapter 7 . 12/27/2017
Kinda short but still good, though ash is kinda meh since he’s 17 and still hasn’t matured
ReaperOfBalance chapter 6 . 12/26/2017
Hehe, one way to stick it to May and max would be for their mom to become one of ash’s girls (if you give him more than one that is)
Also what happened to the Mr mime that lived at Ash’s House?
ReaperOfBalance chapter 5 . 12/26/2017
Please tell me ash will get more badass as this goes
ReaperOfBalance chapter 4 . 12/26/2017
If Pikachu was out, where was he in all the conversations?
Uh, is ash just going to leave his mom unconscious in a strange place? What about her Mr. mime? Why didn’t ash just ask a legendary or Nathan to heal her?
ReaperOfBalance chapter 3 . 12/26/2017
Nice chap, bit short but good
ReaperOfBalance chapter 2 . 12/26/2017
Something that occurred to me: how can ash’s former friends claim they are better than him when they all have lost to him in battle? None of them (except Brock once) have ever beaten him (not counting trip since in your fic he’s not really a friend also not counting the one on one Pikachu had with electavire) and they think they are better?
Nice chapter and I hope ash will start gaining some intelligence compared to his tv appearances (still can’t belive that they have him as 10 through all of the series when each series spans months in the show at a time)
ReaperOfBalance chapter 1 . 12/25/2017
Hmm not sure how I feel about the OC getting a harem and ash not getting at least a mini one
If you want women that legit have feelings for ash there is Anabel, flannery, melody, Angie, Lyra, Serena, and Miette
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