Reviews for Peril in the Pyramid
Dan G. Panterita chapter 1 . 4/10
I recently stumble upon your fic AND GOD DAMN IT IT'S PERFECT!

I honestly like S02 and I LOVE KEN, but I hated how much MORE closure I needed from him. In a way I get why they rush it, but the only one he got it with was with Davis, and there's aslo TK and OBVIOUSLY Tai whom he had to talk to at least at some point. I crave this type of content! It's so wholesome, specially in times like this. I loved your approach on with these two, and I also how you expanded on the episode!

When Tai hugged ken, I MELT! I was so happy.

ALSO, before I forgot I loved that explanation regarding wormmon possessiveness (?) I don't know if its canon, but for me it is from now on :3

I squealed when Gotsumon called Rosa, "Rosita" it was the sweetest thing ;_; btw, I'm mexican, and let me assure you that even if some translations were off (most of them just a wrong letter or a wrong article due google being google) it didn't tick me off or anything, seriously, I appreciated so much the effort you put and how you went your way to translate it.

So, just to help you polish those tidbits, here are the corrections:
“¡Dinosaurio malo!”
“Buenas noches”
“Ken… que bonito”

“Ken le gusta mi mejor ¿no?”, it would be phrased better like this: “Ken me prefiere a mi ¿no?”

When Gotsumon it’s on Tai, the second question it’s more like “¿Las personas muertas roncan?”

And when Gotsumon says that Rosa it’s a good girl, just change “un buena chica” for “una buena chica.”

And the last one i remember is this one with Jose.
“¡Qué magnifico!” (without the word era).

AGAIN, thanks for this piece. I didn't know hOW MUCH I NEEEDED until I read it. Thank you for everything ;3;
Rittie chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
Me too! there's always hope that they might show up in Tri! :D
Mega M chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
Nice story with tai and Ken and also digimon 03 is coming
UnderdogHero chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
I can't wait for 03 either :DDD I'm glad they're making a new season and we're seeing more of the original cast, I hope the 02 kids appear too(though I can't imagine why they wouldn't).
I liked the fic, especially how you wrote Tai and Ken's interactions. The canon-verse didn't give them enough chances to interact, even though they were there.
Angelfish369 chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
There are so many things that I love about this! I must start by saying that season 02 really really rubbed me the wrong way and after watching it through once, there were only a handful of episodes that I have rewatched, so I don't really remember what happened. But the highlight of 02 has to be Ken. His story and character development were really well done. I didn't see very much interaction between Ken and Tai, so what you have here is definitely an interesting perspective! There must be some tension between those two after the whole kidnapping thing! You managed to make this really funny and cute, but also heartfelt and serious. I like Tai's inner dialogue and musings on how to act around Ken, constantly comparing him to Matt. When Ken finally had that outburst and Tai was wondering how to react, my first thought was that he would hug him, and he did! It was a nice way to bridge the characters with Tai recounting the times he messed up, and using those as lessons to move forward instead of being held back. All that stuff between Wormmon and Rosa were so cute! Since you mentioned liking episode 42, I actually went back and watched it! Love how to expanded on that rivalry between Rosa and Wormmon and made it even funnier. Also like how you played up Jose's silliness and made him pull this whole prank on them with Pharoahmon.

Interesting theory about there being a separate language spoken in Digiworld! Hmm...I don't see why not! And cool observation on how people can only smack people of their own age. Well, technically Izzy is a year younger than Tai, and Yolei is a year older than Kari, but you can argue that they are still close enough in age and are peers.

omg sooooooooooooo excited about adventure 03! I absolutely ridiculously flove taichi! That's probably the main reason why I can't stand 02, since Tai and the rest of the cast I love got swept aside and replaced with this bunch that are nowhere as interesting/developed/downright irritating at times. Besides, high school tai was so hot so I can't wait to see how he has matured even further at age 17 (but without losing his signature hair yet!). I guess it will deal with all the crap that is bound to happen to let humans into Digiworld and let everyone on earth have a digimon. I hope it will cater to the 01 audience and be more mature and darker.

I read this two days ago on my phone and didn't review then, and now can't remember all the things I wanted to say about this piece. ugh! probably as soon as I post this more will come to me and I won't be able to add on to my review. sigh...

I really really love your writing and I am so impressed that you can do comedy and angst equally well. Leaving a review for your myotismon story has been on my to-do list for a while and I will most definitely get to it eventually lol. it's one of the creepiest, darkest stories I've read and I love it. anyway, keep writing and I will keep reading! you have a very eager fan with you :)
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
Hey, how are you, long time no talk

That was amusing, cute, awesome and excellent, I loved it and wonderful job