| Reviews for Kaleidoscope of Magic : Machinations of Time |
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   Karazik chapter 2 . 3/26 Dafuq did i read just now. This is beyond shit. I feel dumber for reading this |
| ultra instinct omen chapter 5 . 1/16 i know canon rehash... but fanfic rehash? this is new...have you got no shame ? |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/26/2019 It's like watching a car accident you cannot look away. Congratulations mate you just entered the hallowed hall of worst fanfic authors. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2019 This is even more retarded than the original fic and I did not think that was possible. |
| Eternity Flame1 chapter 11 . 3/6/2019 magnificent, however the ending could have been better if you included an emotional scene. |
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 11/8/2018 this story is ridiculous |
| Monster King chapter 11 . 10/5/2018 Great story |
| TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 6/24/2018 F**k off. |
| jbrew123 chapter 11 . 6/8/2018 Man, you really must have wanted this story to end. I enjoyed it, though it got really confusing at parts, and kudos to you, for actually bringing it to an end rather than leaving it hanging. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/8/2017 What?! who was with Harry wan he left the headmaster room?! |
| Snappy Flowah chapter 11 . 11/2/2017 Loved this, even if it was rushed. And all my respect to you Atlanrom-dono, you always manage to bring about an end to your stories. And I respect you for that, nowadays, the vast majority of stories are just abandoned -commonly with no definitive endings- if the author gets bored of it or runs out of juice. Advice/suggestion to all writers out there; If you ever get tired of your story, and simply wish to discontinue it, you can just make up a definite ending that could satisfy yourself... or even just a ridiculous ending that's completely improbable/impossible to happen in your canon. And that's why I love Atlanrom-dono's stories, he/she always ends their story with a notice and a final chapter... not cliffhangers that make you want to tear you hair out and bang your head repeatedly against the table. Tbh, quite a lot of stories I've read -if they ever are abandoned- have some simple happy(and sometimes, not-so-happy) endings that their author manage to puke out of their grey matter(lol). But that's really all for me,I'll go read the other awesomeness' that Atlanrom-dono ekes out on a fairly reasonable time basis. 'Till next time... ~Snappy~ |
| Snappy Flowah chapter 8 . 11/2/2017 YUUUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! ~Snappy~ |
| Wassa110 chapter 3 . 8/18/2017 Good god, please get a beta as quick as possible. |
| Pepperonyfan1982 chapter 1 . 8/18/2017 pathetic |
| Astral8 chapter 11 . 8/17/2017 I had to reread this to remember everything, and I gotta say this was a pretty fun story, and while the ending was rushed and I can understand why, it was still a pretty good ending whereas others normally just stop and annoyingly leave it there, so thanks for atleast ending it like that! It was a great story that was pretty fun and short |
