Reviews for Reluctant Surrender
Mean Jean 1973 chapter 32 . 9/10/2019
That's too bad you have to end it. I would love to see middle-aged Seto and Kisara. I could see Kisara changing careers. Kaiba could finance her ph D in psychology and she could become a marriage counselor specializing in sex therapy. They could make a dragon baby. As far as what the fourth trial would look like, I don't have the imagination for the supernatural stuff. I really hope you don't kill off Kisara!
Mean Jean 1973 chapter 30 . 8/21/2019
Nicely done. That chapter was very satisfying to read and I really like where this is going.
Guest chapter 29 . 8/12/2019
I'm kind of relieved by this chapter. I totally bought that she was pregnant and they were really happy. I thought you were getting ready to kill Kisara off. Isn't that how it always goes? So she can't have kids because she has a dragon uterus? lol.
Guest chapter 25 . 8/3/2019
I'm a little confused about the dragon. If the dragon was Kisara, why was she in the rubble?
shadowneko003 chapter 25 . 7/6/2019
I always thought it was ridiculous that Kaiba launched himself into the afterlife. Like he “died” just to duel Atem again. Lol
NachtaraPowers chapter 21 . 6/13/2019
I really enjoyed the introspection of Kaiba these past two chapters, and his concerns about their compatibility; it's been really interesting getting to watch him struggle to make sense of it all.

Thanks for continuing this fantastic story; I know we're all already waiting for the next chapter!

Side note: I love how sassy you make Mokuba XD
Guest chapter 20 . 6/12/2019
This was a nice chapter. I like that they aren't bickering this time. I love that they are both mocking Duke while taking advantage of his lake house. I'm looking forward to some smut soon. Glad you're not making us wait very long for the next chapters.
shadowneko003 chapter 19 . 5/17/2019
I always pegged Kaiba to have a blue eyes onesie in his closet. Lmao
NachtaraPowers chapter 18 . 4/28/2019
I just finished binging the whole story so far and I'm obsessed! I'm not usually a Blueshipper, but you've done such a great job here.

I love your interpretation of modern Kisara; she's such a badass but still feels like a real person. And Seto, well...he's Seto, and you write him so well. I mean, who doesn't love a bit of that trademark Kaiba snark?

Thanks so much for a great read and I hope we get to find out what happens next! .
Mean Jean 1973 chapter 17 . 3/26/2019
That was some good banter between these two. Very fun chapter.
Mean Jean 1973 chapter 16 . 3/26/2019
So, they knew each other at the orphanage and he saved her from being kidnapped by a pedophile? How could he have forgotten that? It seems like she forgot that too until just now. I wonder why he would have blocked that out.
Mean Jean 1973 chapter 15 . 12/19/2018
At first I couldn't figure out Seto's motivation for staying for a few days, but then I realized he's being NICE since she's so jacked up. Well, I guess anything's possible. This side of him is making me uncomfortable. Where's the aloof jerk we all know and love? I'm sure he'll show up in the next chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing Kisara put him in his place.
Loved it chapter 14 . 10/30/2018
I'm so glad you wrote a new chapter, but it's such a cliffhanger! I hope you write another chapter soon. Will Seto decide Kisara is just too much to handle or will he continue to see how this relationship plays out? I could see him giving her an ultimatum on the cigarettes and all those cats. I just can't see him tolerating that forever, well maybe if the sex continues to be great. I really like that you are acknowledging the whole past lives aspect of their relationship because it's an interesting concept. How much of their personalities and passions are dictated by these past lives and how much is determined by their present life experiences? Are we destined to love what we loved and excel at what we excelled at in our past lives? Hmmmm... Personally I think Kisara is trying define their relationship too soon! Who of us is NOT guilty of doing that? And if events of the past are doomed to repeat themselves, they are not in the clear yet because ancient Seto saved Kisara three times before she died saving his life. 1. from the slave traders 2. from being stoned by small minded villagers and 3. from a weirdo trying to get her dragon to appear. Hmmm.. what would that look like to be reenacted in the present tense? I'm also very curious how her dragon soul is going to play out.
Mean Jean 1973 chapter 13 . 10/23/2018
I'm so disappointed this is the last chapter. I hope you will continue on with this story because you have a real gift. You have made Seto Kaiba delightfully three dimensional and Kisara into a character that could actually hold his interest. I am embarrassed to say how much time I've spent fantasizing about him, but even in the fantasies I control he inevitably makes me cry from sheer neglect. You have captured this essence of him here - though he is not cruel he is not good boyfriend material. His emotional trauma runs deep and on the surface, hence all the scars on his body. I love the two of them together as you have conjured them - so damaged, yet resilient. And holy sex on a stick your smutty chapters were so hot I literally broke out in a sweat. This is my first foray into reading fan fiction. I read a few not so great ones before coming across "Reluctant Surrender" and I fear I will just be disappointed after this masterpiece. I wish you well!
ParrishGranger chapter 13 . 11/1/2017
I Love this dynamic, I got so fed up with the Seto-Kisara fifty shades of gray tropes, this is refreshing and so fascinating to read! take care of yourself and if possible, please continue!
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