Lol it was fun to read

This is awesome!

A fun little read, despite a few spelling/ grammar mishaps. I was expecting Al to go crazy in defense of his brother (which, I guess he technically did) so I was surprised when Ed was the object of Al's ire! At first I thought it wasn't realistic that Al was so pissed just at Edward, telling him to apologize and outright attacking him, but as soon as the subject of their argument was brought to light, it immediately clicked and made perfect sense. Really enjoyed the story. Thanks for the enjoyable read!

I love this story! I love the take on Al's character and I agree wholeheartedly. Ed's a little terror all the time, but Al, I think, is the real one to worry about angering. I love why he got angry too. I don't think anything else would get Al that angry except for Ed being stupidly careless with his life or making a comment like that.

Very well written and very well done.

omg I love your story . it's so cute but super scary tooThank you for the lovely story and please write more!

I don't want to get in Al's way... Step back!
That was good XD

I have to admit I get the urge to do that too they've gone through enough.

Yeah, it's always the quiet ones! Always! ;D Awesome story!

Good job getting Al mad. It was great to see something like that from him when it is so rarely seen.

Who said Alphonse is spineless and submissive? You got that right, he's one of the strongest characters in FMA! I also thought he'd be much worse than Ed when angry, because when Al gets angry, he means it!:D

Oh wow, this was really something!
To think of Al acting that scary is . . . scary.
Seriously though, this is good! I often forget that Al can be aggressive if he wants to, and it's interesting to see him totally dominate Ed using force. Normally he is able to get his point across in a calm manner, but when he just flips, Ed better watch out!

Keep up the good writing!