Aww you made me cry a little each chapter. Your writing is too good. Argh my right eye keeps leaking tears. Too many memories and terrified imaginings are associated and it's just so freaking well written.

This is so profound and sad and hopeful and beautiful all at once. The last line is my absolute favouritebut then again I really love all three chapters and how Hiro grows throughout them. I have to admit, i was a bit scared, though. I thought chapter 3 would be Aunt Cass's death. Thank God it wasn't...

Awwwwwwwww ! excellent

love it!1

awwwww excelllent

Okay, that is so sad. I feel like I wanna cry, but I can't. Oh, well. SO MANY FEELS! Love it so much!

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Lovely little story, even if it was quite sad. At first I feared that you'll kill Aunt Cass too, so I was nearly relieved haha. XD

(Sobs grossly while eating)

I think I'm half dead

Step one : lie down on floor
Step two : curl in a ball
Step three : reevaluate my life

Eh, I've seen the movie. What could possibly be more sad than that, right? I'm ready for anything.

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Oh, why do I do this to myself.

Seriously, this is incredible. The first chapter in particular brought tears to my eyes, probably because I haven't seen a lot of other takes on the parents' deaths, while Tadashi's is a little more common. But all three parts are absolutely breathtaking.

In tears when I read this, awesome job!

The delightful tears...

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful!

My first thought was how well you portrayed them as children. You have a concrete grasp of a three year old's mind, which can be very difficult to translate onto "paper". ;)

All the characters were spot on and the emotional stakes were high. Beautiful job with nothing less-than-stellar to mention (a couple typos, whoopdeedo).

I will definitely read this again. And again.

-The Shepherdess