honey, i am a very famous critic and fanfic writer so i try not to be mean but that doesn't mean i won't be firm in my writing tone.

Fanfic Professional Inside.27/06/2015
: ok, i will be blunt i am so confuse you need to cut the flashbacks a little short and if can please do a fanfic based on Mr. and Mrs. Smith or maybe Fifty shades of grey and make sure it has lots of chapter bcause some writers have the creativity to write interesting fanfics and then it ends cause its like 5 chapters and i am disappointed in the end cause i get reeled into the story. i would think about 25-30 chapters are enough cause the longest i have ever read and am really impressed by was 54 chapter .try really hard honey .
so if i were to rate i will give you on a scale of 1-10 an...8 1/2

I really hope there are more chapters coming. I love this story! So creative an different than anything else I have read. Great work!

Please continue soon. Would love to see what happens next

I'm trying to suss this out. Obviouisly the Tower is a coma-dream, brought on by her being shot. Oliver is still the Arrow, Tommy didn't die in the Undertaking, instead dying when his car crashed after hitting a patch of black ice. Malcolm blames Felicity for it for... some reason I can't fathom. I'm not sure if Oliver knows Malcolm is the Dark Archer or not, and Roy and Laurel are acting shifty.

I'm intrigued by this story. I should have given it a chance earlier, but at least this way I had a lot of chapters to read. Can't wait for more.

brilliant first two chapters. really exciting read. and just the sort of other worldy kind a fic I love reading lol :) excellent :)

Ahhh they kissed! Sweet! And then she passed out
Not so sweet haha great chapter can't wait to see what happens next!

Interesting story. It seems like Felicity is unconscious in the hospital and this is the dream she's dreaming.

Omg kinda cliffhangery huh?! Hahah can't wait to see what happens next!

No No No No No..
You can't end the chapter like this! I'm dying here!

I want more! Now! Please! .,Ilove this fic, it just keeps getting better and better!
PLease update Again soon! :)

So curious! It's awesome I love how it's a first person too. I read a lot of third person and I write in third person too. But this is mystery and I love it! Keep it going, I'll be following.

It is still so vague... but for some reasons, I want more :) so now I am following this :)
Thank you for sharing, will be waiting for the next chapter.

Hmmm... i think I could get into this

I don't really know what to think of this story yet, but I want to read more, which is a good thing, right? :) Thank you for sharing, and please, updated.
Perhaps, then I will be able to write a better review :)

I loved it! Can't wait for more. Thanks :D

Great start! This fanfic is amazing! I can't wait for more. Thanks :D