The idea for this is awesome, and I liked the start so far. I just want to say it would be great if this revived despite the odds.

Pls continue

you are wrong about the grey warden fertility, a warden CAN have children with a non warden without much difficulties the problem is when 2 wardens try to have a child, since its the taint in the darkspawn blood that makes it nearly imposible, but IT'S possible with the aid of magic, the former lead writter of dragon age origins, dragon age 2 and dragon age inquisition, david gaider even said so himself in a post in the BioWare Social Network Below is the excerpt where he mentions it:

David Gaider wrote: A Grey Warden can have a child... just not with another Grey Warden. So in the case of Alistair being married to a female PC the only possible result is no heir (unless Alistair has a child with someone other than his wife, I suppose). Grey Wardens have a limited chance of conception with a non-Grey Warden, but it does happen... and the child is not tainted in any fashion.

Insofar as how long a Grey Warden could remain on the throne, it depends. The taint will make a Grey Warden age faster, so someone like Loghain isn't going to be able to stay a Grey Warden for very long as he's no young man. The "thirty years" quote is about the maximum, but the reality is that it depends on how often one is exposed to the corruption and sometimes just personal variance- even so, for a monarch to stay on the throne upwards of thirty years is no mean feat. I don't really think that's the limiting factor when it comes to this sort of thing.

Demeira wrote: Well, there goes my fairy tale! I was hoping for a loophole somewhere that would make my fanfiction plausible. I had this all planned out that Alistair and Orlaine (my PC) would have twins because of some ancient Tevinter fertility charms given to them by some sorceress out of Orlais and somehow the act of having these children born of two Wardens would somehow give Alistair and Orlaine an additional 20 years and would somehow dilute the taint. And these twins would start bloodlines that would play into the next two Blights. Looks like that idea is scrapped...

David Gaider wrote: Well... just because it's never happened doesn't mean it never could, I suppose. There are always exceptions. So if you involve some mysterious Tevinter fertility charm... why not? Really I'm just talking about the fact that Grey Wardens never produce offspring together naturally. Unnaturally is an entirely different story.

not a bad start keep up the good work

please continue this story, its really cool :)

I haven't read anything like this before but I want to see how it goes. Continue it, please!

Nice the feeling that several countries will be utterly hope the site the darkspawn emerge from is the elf would be awesome!

I love Dragon age and I love this idea, Maker know I hope to see this story grow and become something truly wondrous.

I hadn't read any stories with this kind of premise before. Louise's task looks daunting even with the skills she acquired in Ferelden. I mean, there's stopping a Blight and then there's stopping the First Blight Ever; in Thedas it took two centuries and nearly ended the Tevinter Imperium! So yeah, extra skills or no, Louise has a certainty-of-death-small-chance-of-success type of quest in front of her. Nice, I look forward to more.

First I want you to say this story is a good idea and I really hope you continue it

hmm interesting

Please continue this story. I found it very entertaining.

I'm assuming Louise somehow was de-aged or something when she ended up in Albion. She is a Grey Warden, and daughter of Karin The Heavy Wind, that combination shows that she is not weak.

interesting idea

Great to see that you havent dropped this story, I hope you keep updating it.