Reviews for Antumbra
Oracle of Hylia chapter 1 . 3/19
yes! A sequel would be amazing!
mlpfanceline1 chapter 27 . 10/8/2019
Oh a sequel. Can't wait for that and I sadly couldn't fine you drawings of twili Link. Or any pictures of this story. If you maybe could send a link to me from a few pictures, I would be very happy.
GotTheMovesLikeYaegar chapter 13 . 5/19/2019
Heaven this is hard to read. I want to like this but I can't bring myself to read something that does nothing at all. I don't know what is going on at all and if there is a point to it, I feel like these characters are equally bad but one is portrayed much better than the other, and did I mention I have no idea where this is going? I get TP has a slow start but jeez this makes that look like Sonic.

I didn't like this premise to start with, but now I feel like these characters are just annoying. " Oh I did nothing but read all day, but do nothing to improve my situation, but boo hoo my husband doesn't like me" and " oh I was in my study all day but hey here is how I feel, btw did you know I'm a loser? Yeah you spent the last ten chapters being told that but hey now it is slightly more aggressive." Even if it was to get better I feel that this anguishingly slow start is not worth it.
Guest chapter 27 . 1/2/2019
Read this from 3AM to 8AM. I had my doubts at the beginning but the story really caught me off guard in a good way, enough that I read the entire thing in one night, at least. Thank you for writing this.
Macartyjr2 chapter 27 . 12/2/2018
OH MY GOODNESS! I'm sorry I just had the goofiest grin on my face the whole time reading this final chapter and seeing the story come to a full circle. I loved how it began with Zelda's pov and their less-enthusiastic wedding and then end with Link's pov and their super loved-filled wedding renewal. I have no qualms with this ending and I'm just super happy to see that the story is now complete from its long journey of being written. I would love to see a possible sequel and I'd be sure to read it, whenever it happens. Good luck in your future projects and hope to enjoy more of your stories in the future.
Keep Writing! -Macartyjr2
Klaus22 chapter 27 . 11/30/2018
Im excited about your next updating )
Ultimate blazer chapter 27 . 11/28/2018
Nice ending! It was a pleasure to read this story during 4 years. Good luck with your next project.
WriterRay chapter 27 . 11/28/2018
Wow...I can’t believe it’s finished! I’ve been with this story since 2015 and have adored it since day one. Seeing you grow as a writer has been a privilege! I absolutely love the world you have created and the plot you made, it inspired me to put my own work out there. I hope to read more stories from you in the future! Best of luck to you ️
Guest chapter 26 . 11/7/2018
I feel lucky for picking this up now after you came back to edit/finish it haha. It's been a really interesting story, and your writing an editing seems to have improved between pre and post hiatus. There are a few small errors here and there where sentences were changed slightly but it's still clear to read.I've really enjoyed this so far and look forward to the conclusion! :)
Macartyjr2 chapter 26 . 10/15/2018
Be still my Zelink heart. This chapter was such a pleasure and joy to read. I'm super happy that you got this chapter out for us to read. It was full of happy moments and simple times that it left me with a smile throughout the whole chapter. There so much more opportunities for Link now that the light doesn't harm him anymore. The trial scene was written well in my judgment and shows how much these character's have changed from the very beginning. It was also pretty clever that Link found the contract from King Daphnes's study and was able to use it during the trial. And yes the interactions between Link and Zelda left me in awe of how different things have changed between them when I recall the beginning chapters. It's bittersweet to see that this is the penultimate chapter, but I excited to see how this all ends and I'm glad to be a part of this journey. Thank you for writing! -Macartyjr2
Ultimate blazer chapter 26 . 10/14/2018
Nice chapter!
TreeForest chapter 3 . 10/14/2018
These two making my heart swell at 4 am in the morning they are so adorably awkward to each other it makes me fangirl so much
Ultimate blazer chapter 25 . 8/14/2018
Nice chapter!
Macartyjr2 chapter 25 . 8/12/2018
I'm sad and happy to see that this story is coming to an end, and I also had fun and enjoyment in reading this story. The chapter felt like a nice break from the crazy action of the last chapter. I hope Ralis will be strong though this chaos and he has Robyn to keep him company. I also liked how Link finally got the confirmation of his lineage and how this might hint to something big is to come in the future as Zelda said. That was nice touch at the end with the vial and I bet now Link can fully experience Hyrule without all the garb. Along with staying in the temple without a sense of time, I hope it didn't take too long, poor Rusl was outside waiting all day possibly, hah. Anyway, I'm curious to see what happens next since the story is almost over, but I know that some wrench has to be thrown in first before the happy conclusion and I will gladly wait til the end. Until the next chapter -Macartyjr2
SweetestChick chapter 25 . 8/11/2018
Nice update. I like how you describe things, if I didn’t say that previously lol. Very sad for the Queen dying, but hopefully Ralis will turn out fine, especially with a friend accompanying him. Also I can’t help but wonder what FD was saying in their minds. Interesting.

See ya next update!
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