| Reviews for Vengeance of The Stars |
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   Valeska'sGirl chapter 3 . 3/3/2015 Owlpaw must become Owleyes! And could Wolfkit be Wolfjay? Rating 10 on all death rates. Also, Shadekit could be Shademist? Forestclan! Nightpaw- Nightshade? Owleyes and Wolfjay be mates? One kit named Graykit, male? Nightshade and Shademist be mates? |
| Go Warriors chapter 12 . 2/26/2015 The prophecy! Torn Web is in the Prophocy! |
| ItSaCaTwOrLd chapter 12 . 2/11/2015 I am finally back! It's been almost 2 months, I'm suprised it's taken me this long. I actually got to NY last week, but then I got very sick with a high fever, and I couldn't stop throwing up. It was horrible! I almost went to a hospital, it was so bad. I couldn't eat all week, or else I would throw up again. I must've gotten food poisoning... Anyways, please update soon! I've missed you sooo much! :D |
| Cartoon Warrior chapter 12 . 1/11/2015 Yes! I knew it! (Happy dance!) |
| xXLeafheartXx chapter 12 . 1/11/2015 Yay! Awesome! At first I was like, wth where's Leafheart I thought she was warrior! |
| Loki-Scamander chapter 11 . 1/6/2015 Nnnnnnnnooooooooo I died lynxkit you hugged me too much |
| Go Warriors chapter 1 . 1/3/2015 Ok, so here's another oc if u need one, feel free to use it though, hope Scorchstar is menacing enough to make his mark in The Dark Forest! Scorchstar Dark Forest (formally DuneClan leader) Tom Large, muscular black Tom with fiery red eyes and a white paw with feathery ears and tail tip Cold hearted, swift to lie, and menacing, he tricked all of RiseClan and ShineClan to go to war with each other, by lying. Many cats died from murder, suicide, battling, infected wounds, or kit birth. After killing many kits and warriors, he then got killed by Snowstar. Mother: Fluffy (kittypet) Father: Mudshed (Rouge) I'm really not sure if anyone (or even u Starsinger04) will see this in time to put it in the story, so I'm copying and pasting this into a review for VOTS too. |
| xXLeafheartXx chapter 11 . 1/2/2015 Whoa! Awesome! |
| Cartoon Warrior chapter 11 . 1/2/2015 I think Lynxkit, maybe? I think so because Lynxkit and Slaughterstorm were the only two in that scene I guess... |
| 854627895 chapter 11 . 1/1/2015 DUN DUN DUUNNNNN! The dark forest! Poor Lynxkit, though... |
| Cartoon Warrior chapter 10 . 12/29/2014 Sure, the two should have more kits! The more da betta!(hehe, notice the slang i put in the last sentence? Oh neva mind, of course ya do!) Loudmoon: i love da slang! Riftstorm: (rolls eyes) Oh boy... |
| ItSaCaTwOrLd chapter 10 . 12/28/2014 You're welcome! Oh, and I probably won't be reviewing for a while because I'm moving from London to New York with my aunt. So I won't post for a couple of weeks. Happy New Years! |
| xXLeafheartXx chapter 10 . 12/28/2014 The only weird name is Mousecatch, and anyways... Hummm, I think there's enough kit business... So maybe no... And poor Silverstar! Being annoyed by the kits! Actually, he might like it a little. And Leafheart's apprentice is Mousepaw, right? Oh! All my ForestClan cats appeared here! Yay! Great chapter! I can't wait for more! |
| 854627895 chapter 10 . 12/28/2014 Aww! Lynxkit is so cute! Great chapter, once again! |
| Amu Wants Noodles chapter 1 . 12/14/2014 Name: Frostpool Description: A light-gray she-cat, with a white spot over her eye, and on her belly. A great hunter and tactician. Will always try to avoid fights. Rank: Warrior (She can start as an apprentice if you want) Clan: Jewelclan Death rate: 3 Family: Was taken from her family when kittypet. Other: She joined the clan after she was abandon by her house folks. |
