Really really well done. It captures their relationship so perfectly.

Beautiful- brought tears to my eyes!

This was simply outstanding! Bravo, m'dear! :)

Okay, again, your writing is amazing. I just read your other one about Selina and decided to see what else you have, and I stumbled upon this little beauty. Again, I will say kudos for the second person. Please expand on this. It is just beautiful.

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This makes we want to give Gotham another chance but at the same time is one of the things so wrong with that show.

I can't even understand how in the world Selena and Bruce having this kind of relationship so early in there lives would do to the story as we know it. That on top of Bullock being older then Jim and Montoya and Allen being around already...

I want to like the show but its just so WRONG that I have a hard time getting past that...

That was beautiful. You should do one from Selina's POV I think it would compliment this piece. Their lives are really intertwined in more ways than expect. Great job!

omg that was so well written i need more

Just one word: Perfect.

I like how you portrayed the young Bruce Wayne as the shy kind of boy he is whenever he is around Cat. You painted both of the characters perfectly well with this little story right here, and it's beautiful! I love it, very nicely done!

This is absolutely perfect and I loved it very much. It's too adorable, I can't handle! Thanks for writing, for real! :D

This is GREAT

Pretty good, i always love seeing the fanfics that ship Bruce and Cat from the Gotham show.

Mindblown. How the heck do people write these stories so well?

Anyway, I loved it. They're so cute!

Beautiful. I really love our young Bruce/Selina's in Gotham