this isnt a one shot, this is a story that u gave up on and called it a one shot to save face lmao

Damn I wasn't expecting him to be so manipulative.

Sociopathy and phsycopathy are two different things. A sociopath shows antisocial behaviour and little to no conscience. A Phsycopath shows violent behaviour.

This is very well written displaying psychopath tendencies. I hope you would write more

You have talent as a writer. I enjoyed reading.

I don’t think this Harry’s a psychopath at all. He’s just a severely abused child trying to survive.

Harry is Damien-esque in this, and I love it2

In my opinion(no offense) you’re beginning is a bit too similar to other stories I’ve read and did Infact almost make me stop reading BUT the rest of it is so well written and realistic that it makes up for it

Please please please postt other chapters, I want to see how the wizarding world will react to this Harry.

Jesus Christ. This has given me the chills.
Dumbledore has no idea what his decision at leaving Harry at the Dursley’s will entail. Once Harry finds out he left him there he will be in VERY deep trouble.

Seems good to me. I'm a pretty patient person though, so I guess it wouldn't really matter. I liked this.

Quite a chilling fic and it doesn’t surprise me.
I work with abused children and quite a few are very like Harry here.
In canon JK Rowling wrote Harry as if he was not messed up. The Dursleys are the same in this story as they are in canon. Harry should have a ton of problems. Abused children are extremely withdrawn, have anger issues.
Harry should have had a weakened brain for his mistreatment. Not being fed properly which Harry was indeed exposed to would affect it. All that spent time in the cupboard under the stairs should have Harry be weak in movement. He shouldn’t be able to maintain relationships. No one has been kind before to Harry so he would have been suspicious if someone was being nice or friendly to him.

Even though the beginning is calm, it helps us discover the story. And no, it did not stop me from reading. I really like it and I think I'm going to look up for that disease... It is interesting. I hope you'd to continue that story 'cause it IS really cool and I want to know what happens when Harry will go to Hogwart.

Hey I am so loving this book please please please update!

God you have me hooked this is a great beggining., So i am on my knees begging you to continue as your an extraordinary writer and your work deserves praise