WOW! That was a fun and fantastic ride. A perfect complement to Yarning's original tale! It was truly wonderful and congratulations. Thank you for your story and happy tales! _ Chi!
~Jasmine Melody~

This is so well written and so beautiful. This may have been long to read but every minute was worth it. This is such an interesting take. I love how you involved the father in here so much since it's a little rare that people do. I love this. Thank you for posting such a wonderful tale.

This was an interesting take on the subject. I am thoroughly impressed.