You're English is very good and I would love if you continued!

Cute! Hope there's more! :)

Yes, you should continue, let your inspiration go...;-) Don't worry about your English, it's okay, I speak french as well, so that's that.
And could you in one of your chapters make hiro sick, you know sibling bonding beetween Tadashi and Hiro

I liked it. Asides from a few small issues with where you changed paragraphs, I didn't notice any major mistakes.
You should definatly continue this.
And congratulations on your first fic.
-GS